April 10, 2025
Just tried
I want to try to write something here.
I hope anyone can correct my writing if I make a mistake.
This is about someone's life.
He lived in another country that had many crimes.
He wanted to change this condition.
However, he didn't have the power to do it.
So, he chose to change his life for the first time.
Because he knows that the big changes can be born from the small changes.
Saya ingin mencoba untuk menuliskan sesuatu di sini.
Saya berharap seseorang dapat memperbaiki tulisanku jika saya membuat sebuah kesalahan.
Ini tentang kehidupan seseorang.
Dia tinggal di sebuah negara yang memiliki banyak kejahatan.
Dia ingin mengubah kondisi ini.
Namun, dia tidak memiliki kemampuan untuk melakukan itu.
Jadi, dia memutuskan untuk mengubah hidupnya terlebih dahulu.
Karena dia tahu, perubahan besar dan lahir dari perubahan kecil.
Just triedTrying
Would be a better title for your text.
I want to try to write something here.
This is perfectly correct, but it would sound more natural to say "I want to try writing something here."
I hope anysomeone can correct my writing if I make any mistakes.
This is about someone's life.
He lived in another country that had many crimes.
Again, this is not grammatically incorrect, but a native would say "He lived in another country that had a lot of crime."
He wanted to change this conditions.
However, he didn't have the power to do itso.
So, he chose to change his life for the first time.
Because he knows that the big changes can be born from the small changes.
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Your level of English is excellent! I made a few minor improvements but it was already very good.
Just tried
I want to try to write something here.
I hope anysomeone can correct my writing if I make a mistake.
This is about someone's life.
He lived in another country that had many crimes.
He wanted to change this condition.
However, he didn't have the power to do it.
So, he chose to change his life for the first time.
Because he knows that the big changes can be born from the small changes.
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I hope anyone can correct my writing if I make a mistake. I hope I hope |
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He lived in another country that had many crimes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! He lived in another country that had many crimes. Again, this is not grammatically incorrect, but a native would say "He lived in another country that had a lot of crime." |
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