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March 30, 2021

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I remember I posted a passage a couple days ago talking about having my car served in a Volkswagen 4 S store. Back then, they said the booster pump tubing was broken. They also said the tubing would cost more than 1700 yuan and the man-hour fee to fix it would cost about more than 400 yuan. I was really shocked when I heard the tubing's price and the man- hour fee, so I didn't fix it. Today I went to a private automobile repair shop to fix that problem. You know what? The accessory fee and man hour fee in total was only 360 yuan. The 4 S store is really black-hearted. After listening to my story, do you still dare to go there to fix cars?

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I remember I posted a passage a couple days ago talking about having my car serviced in a Volkswagen 4 S store.

Back then, they said the booster pump tubing was broken.

They also said the tubing would cost more than 1700 yuan and the manper-hour fee to fix it would cost about more than 400 yuan.

per hour basically means each hour

you don't need both 'about' and 'more'

I was really shocked when I heard the tubing's price and the man- per-hour fee, so I didn't fix it.

Today I went to a private automobile repair shop to fix thate problem.

You know what?

TIn total, the accessory fee and man per-hour fee in total was only 360 yuan.

The 4 S store is really black-heartedevil.

evil is a more common word in English than black hearted

After listening to my story, do you still dare to go there to fix your cars?

'your car' referring to the person listening your story

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April 2, 2021

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I remember I posted a passage a couple days ago talking about having my car served in a Volkswagen 4 S store.


I remember I posted a passage a couple days ago talking about having my car serviced in a Volkswagen 4 S store.

Back then, they said the booster pump tubing was broken.


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They also said the tubing would cost more than 1700 yuan and the man-hour fee to fix it would cost about more than 400 yuan.


They also said the tubing would cost more than 1700 yuan and the manper-hour fee to fix it would cost about more than 400 yuan.

per hour basically means each hour you don't need both 'about' and 'more'

I was really shocked when I heard the tubing's price and the man- hour fee, so I didn't fix it.


I was really shocked when I heard the tubing's price and the man- per-hour fee, so I didn't fix it.

Today I went to a private automobile repair shop to fix that problem.


Today I went to a private automobile repair shop to fix thate problem.

You know what?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The accessory fee and man hour fee in total was only 360 yuan.


TIn total, the accessory fee and man per-hour fee in total was only 360 yuan.

The 4 S store is really black-hearted.


The 4 S store is really black-heartedevil.

evil is a more common word in English than black hearted

After listening to my story, do you still dare to go there to fix cars?


After listening to my story, do you still dare to go there to fix your cars?

'your car' referring to the person listening your story

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