March 28, 2021
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According to Chinese tradition, we should sweep the tombs of our ancestors to show our respect and misses when the Tomb Sweeping Days comes. My dad passed away many years ago. I went to my home village to sweep my dad's tomb. I haven't lived in my home village for many years. There are many big changes in my village. Generally speaking, villagers'living conditions have improved a lot. The obvious representation is that they all built villanettes, and each villanette is with three floors or so. But there are still many disadvantages in the village. For example, those villanettes lack planning and build in a mess. There are no public health facilities, such as public sewage disposal systems and public garbage disposal stations in the village. So the public health environment is still backward compared to what it is in cities. There are still many aspects that need to develop in the countryside. This is some thought that happened during this trip from me.
According to Chinese tradition, when the Tomb Sweeping Days come, we should sweep the tombs of our ancestors to show our respect and misses when the Tomb Sweeping Days comesthat we miss them.
My dad passed away many years ago.
I went to my homthe village where I grew up to sweep my dad's tomb.
"home town" or "home country". we don't really say "home village", "home city",etc
I haven't lived in my home village for many years.
There are many big changes in my village.
Better: My village has changed a lot.
Generally speaking, the villagers' living conditions have improved a lot.
"the" because you're talking about specific villagers
The most obvious representationchange/difference is that they all built villanettes, and each villanette is. Each with three floors or so.
For example, those villanettes lack planning and build in aare messy.
"built" not "build"
There are no public health facilities, such as public sewage disposal systems and public garbage disposal stations in the village.
So the public health environment is still backward compared to what it is in cities.
There are still many aspects that need to development in the countryside.
This is somese are some of the thoughts that happenedoccurred to me during this trip from me.
Also "These are somethings I thought of/about during this trip"
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March 28, 2021
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According to Chinese tradition, we should sweep the tombs of our ancestors to show our respect and misses when the Tomb Sweeping Days comes. According to Chinese tradition, when the Tomb Sweeping Days come, we should sweep the tombs of our ancestors to show our respect and |
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My dad passed away many years ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went to my home village to sweep my dad's tomb. I went to "home town" or "home country". we don't really say "home village", "home city",etc |
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I haven't lived in my home village for many years. I haven't lived in my |
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There are many big changes in my village. There are many big changes in my village. Better: My village has changed a lot. |
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Generally speaking, villagers'living conditions have improved a lot. Generally speaking, the villagers' living conditions have improved a lot. "the" because you're talking about specific villagers |
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The obvious representation is that they all built villanettes, and each villanette is with three floors or so. The most obvious |
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But there are still many disadvantages in the village. |
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For example, those villanettes lack planning and build in a mess. For example, those villanettes lack planning and "built" not "build" |
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There are no public health facilities, such as public sewage disposal systems and public garbage disposal stations in the village. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So the public health environment is still backward compared to what it is in cities. So the public health environment is still backward compared to |
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There are still many aspects that need to develop in the countryside. There are still many aspects that need |
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This is some thought that happened during this trip from me. Th Also "These are somethings I thought of/about during this trip" |
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