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Bair

Nov. 6, 2023

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Journal #23: "How I'm lerning English"

Today I want to think about time. What did I mean? I meant how fast time can run. Time is so slow when you was child and time is so fast when you are adult. Let me explain. For example, if you wait your birthday, when you was child, you count each hour or day before birthday and time looks like a gum. It stretches. But, When you are adult you do your job or do housework or carry about your close people etc. In than case, time looks like Flash. If you don't know who if Flash I give you hint: he is a superhero. So, what I'm talking about. Oh, when you become adult your time run so quickly. You can't control it and when your birthday is come you are wonder.
I hope you understand what I mean.
In the end, I want to tell you some advice: "Be careful when you dealing with time".

Thanks for reading my journal.

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Today I want to thinalk about time.

What dido I mean?

I meant how fast time can runseems to fly.

Time is so slow when you was child and timeAs a child, time seemed to move so slowly but as an adult ist so fast when you are aduleems like time moves too fast.

Let meAllow me to explain.

For example, if you wait your birthday, when you was child, you count each hour or day before birthday and time looks like a as a child, the days spent waiting for your birthday to come around seemed like the longest of your life. You eagerly counted days and hours and minutes until it was finally time for you to celebrate. Time stretched like bubblegum.

But, When you are adult you do your job or doHowever once you're an adult and start carrying more responsibilities like housework orand carry about your close people etc.ing for your family, time suddenly becomes the Flash. (For those of you who are unfamiliar he's a superhero who can move at the speed of light. )

Oh, whenTime as an adult seems to move so quickly, instead of eagerly waiting for your become adult your time run so quicklyirthday to come around, you blink and suddenly its tomorrow. This would have been any kid's dream. But its sort of bittersweet as an adult.

I hope you understand what I mean.

In the end, I want to tell you some advice: "Be careful when you dealing with time".

As a fitting conclusion here's some advice: "Be cautious when you're dealing with time. Spend it wisely and make the most of it because we will all run out of it someday."

Thanks for reading my journal.

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I saw your journal and remembered a poem I wrote about this situation and I wanted to share it with you and with others and I hope all of you enjoy it and see through all the layers of emotion I put into this. All my poetry comes straight from the heart and it means the world to me.

Also, a note on the journal, I did add and take away a few things and I did tweak the quote a bit at the end to make it a bit more impactful and inspirational :)

Father Time

What have you done?

What happened to you?

You used to always be with me

I thought you'd never leave

What happened?

You're so closed off now

You take and take

But hardly ever give

I've been patient and generous

Can't you do the same?

I often make an effort to stop and smell the flowers

I pause to enjoy the scenery for a bit

Can't you do that too?

Like you used to?

Why do you have to move so fast?

Nothing can be enjoyed or cherished in that way

Don't you want to feel the world around you?

Don't you want to sit on the beach and watch the sun set?

And marvel at all the colors in the world?

Aren't you sick of the blur?

Aren't you exhausted?

Take a break from running

slow down

Take a walk

Rest

You'll thank me later....

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jazimine41007

Nov. 8, 2023

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I agree with you;)

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Bair

Nov. 9, 2023

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Wow. It was realy good! Thanks for your feedback and thanks for the poem!!!

Journal #23: "How I'm learning English"

What dido I mean?

I meant how fast time can run.

Time is so slow when you wasare a child and time is so fast when you are an adult.

For example, ifwhen you're a child and you're waiting for your birthday, when you was child, you count each hour or day before your birthday, and time looks like a gum.

It stretches.

But, W when you are adult, you do your job or do the housework or carry about your close peoplesupport the people close to you, etc.

In thant case, time looks like The Flash.

If you don't know who ifThe Flash Iis, I'll give you hint: he is a superhero.

So, what I'mWhat am I talking about.?

Oh, when you become an adult your time runs by you so quickly.

You can't control it, and when your birthday is comearrives, you are wondershocked.

I hope you understand what I mean.

In the end, I want to tell you some advice: "Be careful when you are dealing with time".

Thanks for reading my journal.

Feedback

What you say about time is very true - I totally understood what you meant!

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jazimine41007

Nov. 8, 2023

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I agree with you;)

Journal #23: "How I'm learning English"

Today I want to think about time.

What dido I mean?

I meant how fast time can run.

Time iwas so slow when you wasere child and time is so fast when you are adult.

For example, if you wait for your birthday, when you wasere child, you count each hour or day before your birthday and time looks like a gum.

It stretches.

But, When you are an adult you do your job or do housework or carry about yourwith people close peopleto you etc.

In than case, time looks like the Flash.

If you don't know who ifthe Flash Iis, I’ll give you a hint: he is a superhero.

So, that’s what I'm talking about.

Oh, when you become am adult your time rungoes by so quickly.

You can't control it and when your birthday is comes you are wonderamazed.

I hope you understand what I mean.

In the end, I want to tell you some advice: "Be careful when you are dealing with time".

Thanks for reading my journal.

Journal #23: "How I'm lerning English"


Journal #23: "How I'm learning English"

Journal #23: "How I'm learning English"

Today I want to think about time.


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Today I want to thinalk about time.

What did I mean?


What dido I mean?

What dido I mean?

What dido I mean?

I meant how fast time can run.


I meant how fast time can run.

I meant how fast time can run.

I meant how fast time can runseems to fly.

Time is so slow when you was child and time is so fast when you are adult.


Time iwas so slow when you wasere child and time is so fast when you are adult.

Time is so slow when you wasare a child and time is so fast when you are an adult.

Time is so slow when you was child and timeAs a child, time seemed to move so slowly but as an adult ist so fast when you are aduleems like time moves too fast.

Let me explain.


Let meAllow me to explain.

For example, if you wait your birthday, when you was child, you count each hour or day before birthday and time looks like a gum.


For example, if you wait for your birthday, when you wasere child, you count each hour or day before your birthday and time looks like a gum.

For example, ifwhen you're a child and you're waiting for your birthday, when you was child, you count each hour or day before your birthday, and time looks like a gum.

For example, if you wait your birthday, when you was child, you count each hour or day before birthday and time looks like a as a child, the days spent waiting for your birthday to come around seemed like the longest of your life. You eagerly counted days and hours and minutes until it was finally time for you to celebrate. Time stretched like bubblegum.

It stretches.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But, When you are adult you do your job or do housework or carry about your close people etc.


But, When you are an adult you do your job or do housework or carry about yourwith people close peopleto you etc.

But, W when you are adult, you do your job or do the housework or carry about your close peoplesupport the people close to you, etc.

But, When you are adult you do your job or doHowever once you're an adult and start carrying more responsibilities like housework orand carry about your close people etc.ing for your family, time suddenly becomes the Flash. (For those of you who are unfamiliar he's a superhero who can move at the speed of light. )

In than case, time looks like Flash.


In than case, time looks like the Flash.

In thant case, time looks like The Flash.

If you don't know who if Flash I give you hint: he is a superhero.


If you don't know who ifthe Flash Iis, I’ll give you a hint: he is a superhero.

If you don't know who ifThe Flash Iis, I'll give you hint: he is a superhero.

So, what I'm talking about.


So, that’s what I'm talking about.

So, what I'mWhat am I talking about.?

Oh, when you become adult your time run so quickly.


Oh, when you become am adult your time rungoes by so quickly.

Oh, when you become an adult your time runs by you so quickly.

Oh, whenTime as an adult seems to move so quickly, instead of eagerly waiting for your become adult your time run so quicklyirthday to come around, you blink and suddenly its tomorrow. This would have been any kid's dream. But its sort of bittersweet as an adult.

You can't control it and when your birthday is come you are wonder.


You can't control it and when your birthday is comes you are wonderamazed.

You can't control it, and when your birthday is comearrives, you are wondershocked.

I hope you understand what I mean.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope you understand what I mean.

In the end, I want to tell you some advice: "Be careful when you dealing with time".


In the end, I want to tell you some advice: "Be careful when you are dealing with time".

In the end, I want to tell you some advice: "Be careful when you are dealing with time".

In the end, I want to tell you some advice: "Be careful when you dealing with time".

As a fitting conclusion here's some advice: "Be cautious when you're dealing with time. Spend it wisely and make the most of it because we will all run out of it someday."

Thanks for reading my journal.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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