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June 8, 2021

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First of all, I should thank you for your compliment. I always think that if there is any progress in my English learning, there must be your efforts in it. I am always very grateful for what you have done to help me with my English. I won't forget this fact.
Yes, follow doctor's advice, make sure it's not serious and you will get well soon.
I often look at the US map and find that Miami is in the best location. It is at the top of a peninsula and I assume it would have good natural scenery. Also, I think of a movie called Miami Vice.
My work unit pays me to check my body once a year and sometimes I pay for myself to have another check-up. Fortunately, the results are not bad, and all physical indicators are normal.
I also did a test for Covid-19. A member of the medical staff held a Cotten Swab stuck to my throat. At the moment the swab touched my throat, I wanted to vomit.
By the way, I have got my first dose of COVID-19 vaccine done and the next dose will be on fifteen this month.
The plaster and Chinese patent medicine are made by a private doctor (technically speaking, he can't be called a doctor because he doesn't have physician qualification) and all the stuff doesn't have a production license. I took those things just because I was helpless back then.
Okay, let's stop here and I hope you have a nice trip.

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First of all, I should thank you for your compliment.

I always think that if there is any progress in my English learning, there must be your efforts in it, I always think it's because of your help.

I am always very grateful for what you have done to help me with my English.

I won't forget this fact.

Yes, follow the doctor's advice, make sure it's not serious and you will get well soon.

I often look at a map of the US map and find that Miami is in the best location.

Also, I think of athe movie called , "Miami Vice".

My work unit pays me to check my bodygo for a checkup once a year and, sometimes I pay for myself to have another check-up done at my own expense.

Fortunately, the results are not bad, and all physical indicators areeverything looks normal.

A member of the medical staff helddical worker stuck a Ccotteon Sswab stuck toin my throat.

At the momentWhen the swab touched my throat, I wanted to vomit.

By the way, I have got my first dose ofthe COVID-19 vaccine done and themy next dose will be on fifteen this month.

Okay, lethat's stop here andall for now. I hope you have a nice trip.

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First of all, I should thank you for your compliment.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I always think that if there is any progress in my English learning, there must be your efforts in it.


I always think that if there is any progress in my English learning, there must be your efforts in it, I always think it's because of your help.

I am always very grateful for what you have done to help me with my English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I won't forget this fact.


I won't forget this fact.

Yes, follow doctor's advice, make sure it's not serious and you will get well soon.


Yes, follow the doctor's advice, make sure it's not serious and you will get well soon.

I often look at the US map and find that Miami is in the best location.


I often look at a map of the US map and find that Miami is in the best location.

It is at the top of a peninsula and I assume it would have good natural scenery.


Also, I think of a movie called Miami Vice.


Also, I think of athe movie called , "Miami Vice".

My work unit pays me to check my body once a year and sometimes I pay for myself to have another check-up.


My work unit pays me to check my bodygo for a checkup once a year and, sometimes I pay for myself to have another check-up done at my own expense.

Fortunately, the results are not bad, and all physical indicators are normal.


Fortunately, the results are not bad, and all physical indicators areeverything looks normal.

I also did a test for Covid-19.


A member of the medical staff held a Cotten Swab stuck to my throat.


A member of the medical staff helddical worker stuck a Ccotteon Sswab stuck toin my throat.

At the moment the swab touched my throat, I wanted to vomit.


At the momentWhen the swab touched my throat, I wanted to vomit.

By the way, I have got my first dose of COVID-19 vaccine done and the next dose will be on fifteen this month.


By the way, I have got my first dose ofthe COVID-19 vaccine done and themy next dose will be on fifteen this month.

The plaster and Chinese patent medicine are made by a private doctor (technically speaking, he can't be called a doctor because he doesn't have physician qualification) and all the stuff doesn't have a production license.


I took those things just because I was helpless back then.


Okay, let's stop here and I hope you have a nice trip.


Okay, lethat's stop here andall for now. I hope you have a nice trip.

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