June 4, 2021
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The view of the video is about a snack street which is called Liufang snack street. Liufang is the short name of the Sixth Textile Factory of Anhui Province. So there are a lot of workers living in this area and this is why the snack block was formed. There are various types of snacks there and all of them are really bargain and tasty. I went there yesterday to eat a boxed lunch because there is braised pork in it. The braised pork is very delicious, tender and fragrant.
The view of theI watched a video is about a snack street which itreet full of snacks called Liufang sSnack sStreet.
"The view of the video is about" does not make sense. You can start by introducing this video by saying "I watched a video about". It's also better to change the entire street name to a proper noun and capitalize it all - "Liufang Snack Street".
Liufang is the shorter name of the Sixth Textile Factory of Anhui Province.
You could also write "nickname", which is more casual.
So tThere are a lot of workers living in this area and this, which is why the snack block was formed.
It's better not to start your sentence with "so" here.
There are various types of snacks there, and all of them are really bargain-priced and tasty.
You can also say "all of them are really cheap and tasty" - more simple!
"Bargain" is a noun (or a verb), not an adjective, so it cannot be used here like "they are really bargain". I changed it to "bargain-priced", so that it is an adjective. However, to use "bargain" as a noun, you can say something like, "this snack is really a bargain!" "I will give you a bargain if you buy this meat."
I went there yesterday to eat a boxed lunch because there is braised pork in it.
The braised pork is very delicious, tender and fragrant.
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我也很好奇，所以看了一下关于六纺老街的视频！看起来很有气氛，应该很有意思去逛逛吃好吃的！
Note: In English, we also have a term called "street food", describing quick food sold on the street, which you can use in the future. For example, "Liufang is filled with many delicious kinds of street food."
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The view of the video is about a snack street which is called Liufang snack street.
"The view of the video is about" does not make sense. You can start by introducing this video by saying "I watched a video about". It's also better to change the entire street name to a proper noun and capitalize it all - "Liufang Snack Street". |
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Liufang is the short name of the Sixth Textile Factory of Anhui Province. Liufang is the shorter name of the Sixth Textile Factory of Anhui Province. You could also write "nickname", which is more casual. |
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So there are a lot of workers living in this area and this is why the snack block was formed.
It's better not to start your sentence with "so" here. |
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There are various types of snacks there and all of them are really bargain and tasty. There are various types of snacks there, and all of them are really bargain-priced and tasty. You can also say "all of them are really cheap and tasty" - more simple! "Bargain" is a noun (or a verb), not an adjective, so it cannot be used here like "they are really bargain". I changed it to "bargain-priced", so that it is an adjective. However, to use "bargain" as a noun, you can say something like, "this snack is really a bargain!" "I will give you a bargain if you buy this meat." |
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I went there yesterday to eat a boxed lunch because there is braised pork in it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The braised pork is very delicious, tender and fragrant. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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