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Precisely speaking, Fuyang Museum is on the north of the Ba-Li-song road and the park is on the south of the road. In other words, the park and the museum are only separated by one road. Fuyang Science and Technology Museum is on the same grounds as the park because it is in the southeast corner of the park.
There are many wild ducks there, as well as some pelicans. Swans only come from the north during autumn, but they seem not to stop. I think they were migrating to the south. There must be some other migrating birds too, but I don't know exactly about them.
The odd shaped structure is Fuyang Science and Technology Museum. As to why it is built with this shape, I really don't know. When I come close to it, it looks very like a shark. Its main function is to popularize scientific and technological knowledge among young people.
Yes, they are benches, but at that time I just couldn't think of it and I could only think of "chairs". I learned "stool" before and for many English words, I know their meaning when I see them, but when I need to use them, they can't come to my mind naturally.
I don't know exactly what you mean by saying "other side". This path is on an area of lawn and I think it does lead to the other side of the lawn.
Okay, I will find the name of this flower soon.
What is on the top of the tall buildings are tower cranes. Its function is to lift construction materials to the top of the buildings so that the buildings can be continuously constructed.

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Precisely speaking, Fuyang Museum is on the north of the Ba-Li-song road and the park is on the south of the road.

In other words, the park and the museum are only separated by one road.

Fuyang Science and Technology Museum is on the same grounds as the park because it is in the southeast corner of the park.

There are many wild ducks there, as well as some pelicans.

Swans only come from the north during autumn, but they seem not to stop.

I think they were migrating to the south.

There must be some other migrating birds too, but I don't know exactly about them.

You can also use "particularly" instead of "exactly"

The odd shaped structure is Fuyang Science and Technology Museum.

As to why it is built within this shape, I really don't know.

When I come close to it, it looks very much like a shark.

Or you can say: "it looks a lot like a shark"

Its main function is to popularize scientific and technological knowledge among young people.

Yes, they are benches, but at that time I just couldn't think of it and I could only think of "chairs".

I learned "stool" before and for many English words, I know their meaning when I see them, but when I need to use them, they can't come to my mind naturally.

I don't know exactly what you mean by saying "other side".

A synonym for "other side" could be "opposite"

This path is on an area of lawn and I think it does lead to the other side of the lawn.

Okay, I will find the name of this flower soon.

What is on the top of the tall buildings are tower cranes.

Its function is to lift construction materials to the top of the buildings so that the buildings can be continuously constructed.

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June 11, 2021

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June 11, 2021

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Precisely speaking, Fuyang Museum is on the north of the Ba-Li-song road and the park is on the south of the road.


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In other words, the park and the museum are only separated by one road.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Fuyang Science and Technology Museum is on the same grounds as the park because it is in the southeast corner of the park.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are many wild ducks there, as well as some pelicans.


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Swans only come from the north during autumn, but they seem not to stop.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think they were migrating to the south.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There must be some other migrating birds too, but I don't know exactly about them.


There must be some other migrating birds too, but I don't know exactly about them.

You can also use "particularly" instead of "exactly"

The odd shaped structure is Fuyang Science and Technology Museum.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As to why it is built with this shape, I really don't know.


As to why it is built within this shape, I really don't know.

When I come close to it, it looks very like a shark.


When I come close to it, it looks very much like a shark.

Or you can say: "it looks a lot like a shark"

Its main function is to popularize scientific and technological knowledge among young people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yes, they are benches, but at that time I just couldn't think of it and I could only think of "chairs".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I learned "stool" before and for many English words, I know their meaning when I see them, but when I need to use them, they can't come to my mind naturally.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't know exactly what you mean by saying "other side".


I don't know exactly what you mean by saying "other side".

A synonym for "other side" could be "opposite"

This path is on an area of lawn and I think it does lead to the other side of the lawn.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Okay, I will find the name of this flower soon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What is on the top of the tall buildings are tower cranes.


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Its function is to lift construction materials to the top of the buildings so that the buildings can be continuously constructed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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