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Bair

Oct. 8, 2023

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Journal #17: "How I'm learning English"

Theme of this journal is my second lovely recipe. It's pilaf. For this meal you need 500g of beef, 300g of rice, two carrots, 550g of water, two onions and some spices. First of all, I wash the rice, carrots and onions. After that, I chop the beef, carrots and onions. Then I light on the stove and put on a pan. Then I put on the pan oil, carrots and onions. It's fry 3 to 5 minutes. After that I add meat. It's fry 10 minutes. After that, I add the rice, spices and water. All of this need boil some 20 minutes. Enjoy!

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The theme of this journal is my second lovely recipe for pilaf.

It's pilaf.

For this meal, you'll need 500g of beef, 300g of rice, two2 carrots, 550g of water, two2 onions and some spices.

First of all, I wash the rice, carrots and onions.

TI then I light onignite the stove and put onlace a pan on it.

Then I put oil in the pan oil,and add the carrots and onions.

It's fry them for 3 to 5 minutes.

After that I add meatI then add the meat and fry it for 10 minutes.

It's fry 10 minutes.

After that, I add the rice, spices and water and let them boil for 20 minutes.

All of this need boil some 20 minutes.

The theme of this journal is my second lovely recipe.

Then I light on the stove and put on a pan.

Then I put on the panthe oil, carrots and onions in the pan.

It's fry them for 3 to 5 minutes.

It's fry then let it fry for another 10 minutes.

All of this needthen needs to boil somefor 20 minutes.

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Good work! It would be useful to include exactly which spices you use in the recipe. 🙂

Journal #17: "How I'm learning English"


Theme of this journal is my second lovely recipe.


The theme of this journal is my second lovely recipe.

The theme of this journal is my second lovely recipe for pilaf.

It's pilaf.


It's pilaf.

For this meal you need 500g of beef, 300g of rice, two carrots, 550g of water, two onions and some spices.


For this meal, you'll need 500g of beef, 300g of rice, two2 carrots, 550g of water, two2 onions and some spices.

First of all, I wash the rice, carrots and onions.


First of all, I wash the rice, carrots and onions.

After that, I chop the beef, carrots and onions.


Then I light on the stove and put on a pan.


Then I light on the stove and put on a pan.

TI then I light onignite the stove and put onlace a pan on it.

Then I put on the pan oil, carrots and onions.


Then I put on the panthe oil, carrots and onions in the pan.

Then I put oil in the pan oil,and add the carrots and onions.

It's fry 3 to 5 minutes.


It's fry them for 3 to 5 minutes.

It's fry them for 3 to 5 minutes.

After that I add meat.


After that I add meatI then add the meat and fry it for 10 minutes.

It's fry 10 minutes.


It's fry then let it fry for another 10 minutes.

It's fry 10 minutes.

After that, I add the rice, spices and water.


After that, I add the rice, spices and water and let them boil for 20 minutes.

All of this need boil some 20 minutes.


All of this needthen needs to boil somefor 20 minutes.

All of this need boil some 20 minutes.

Enjoy!


Thanks for reading my journal.


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