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The first video was taken on my way cycling to my apartment. All the greenery along the road you saw in the video is all managed and responsible by our municipal engineering company. The residential community developers don't have the responsibility for those greeneries and they don't have the financial ability to afford that. They are only responsible for the areas in their commercial apartment communities.
The plumbing and electrical wires are already built and you just can't see them because they are hidden in the grounds and walls. Yes, there are no outlets or light fixtures, but they are easy to do when you hire decoration workers to do it.
I don't have enough time to watch your videos right now and I will leave my comments after I fully watched them.
Thank you for communicating with me in English. I am very grateful for all you have done.

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The first video was taken on my wayshot while cycling to my apartment.

All the greenery along the roadroadside greenery that you saw in the video is all managed and responsible by our municipal engineering company.

The rResidential community developers don't have the responsibility for those greeneries and they don't have the financial ability to afford that, typically lacking the financial means, aren't responsible.

They are only responsible for the areas in their commercial apartment communities.

The plumbing and electrical wires are already built and yin. You just can't see them because they are hidden in the grounds and walls.

Yes, there are no outlets or light fixtures, but they are easy to do when you hire decoration workers to do itinstall if you hire interior decorators.

"Interior decorators" is a guess.

Unfortunately, I don't have quite enough time to watch your videos right now and I will leave my, but I promise to leave detailed comments after I have fully watched them.!

Slight changes to make it sound more apologetic and polite; that is, more native haha.

Thank you for communicating with me in Englishyour response.

Or: "Thank you for your comment/feedback."

I am very grateful for all you have done.

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The first video was taken on my way cycling to my apartment.


The first video was taken on my wayshot while cycling to my apartment.

All the greenery along the road you saw in the video is all managed and responsible by our municipal engineering company.


All the greenery along the roadroadside greenery that you saw in the video is all managed and responsible by our municipal engineering company.

The residential community developers don't have the responsibility for those greeneries and they don't have the financial ability to afford that.


The rResidential community developers don't have the responsibility for those greeneries and they don't have the financial ability to afford that, typically lacking the financial means, aren't responsible.

They are only responsible for the areas in their commercial apartment communities.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The plumbing and electrical wires are already built and you just can't see them because they are hidden in the grounds and walls.


The plumbing and electrical wires are already built and yin. You just can't see them because they are hidden in the grounds and walls.

Yes, there are no outlets or light fixtures, but they are easy to do when you hire decoration workers to do it.


Yes, there are no outlets or light fixtures, but they are easy to do when you hire decoration workers to do itinstall if you hire interior decorators.

"Interior decorators" is a guess.

I don't have enough time to watch your videos right now and I will leave my comments after I fully watched them.


Unfortunately, I don't have quite enough time to watch your videos right now and I will leave my, but I promise to leave detailed comments after I have fully watched them.!

Slight changes to make it sound more apologetic and polite; that is, more native haha.

Thank you for communicating with me in English.


Thank you for communicating with me in Englishyour response.

Or: "Thank you for your comment/feedback."

I am very grateful for all you have done.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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