May 23, 2021
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Because of the work needs, I went to the suburbs this morning. This community is about 8 kilometers away from downtown, so everything makes me feel new. I saw large areas of wheat fields and rape fields, and some vegetables and peaches. Besides, I also saw a small square that for villagers exercise. In short, I saw many new things that I am not able to see in urban areas and I felt very fresh. Okay, let's see the photos.
Journal
Because of the work needs, I wentI needed to go to the suburbs this morning because of work.
Or more informally, "Work had me go to the suburbs this morning"
This community is about 8 kilometers away from downtown, so everything makes me feel new.
I saw large areas of wheat fields and rapeseed fields, and some vegetables and peaches.
I assume you meant rapeseed (called "canola" in the US). You don't want to say "rape" unless you're actually referring to it!
Besides, I also saw a small square that forwhere some villagers were exerciseing.
In short, I saw many new things that I am not able to see in urban areas and I felt very fresh.
Okay, let's see the photos.
May 23, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Because of the work needs, I went to the suburbs this morning.
Or more informally, "Work had me go to the suburbs this morning" |
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This community is about 8 kilometers away from downtown, so everything makes me feel new. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I saw large areas of wheat fields and rape fields, and some vegetables and peaches. I saw large areas of wheat fields and rapeseed fields, and some vegetables and peaches. I assume you meant rapeseed (called "canola" in the US). You don't want to say "rape" unless you're actually referring to it! |
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Besides, I also saw a small square that for villagers exercise.
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In short, I saw many new things that I am not able to see in urban areas and I felt very fresh. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Okay, let's see the photos. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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