May 21, 2021
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I don't think they are called mopeds or motorized, actually they are electrical bicycles. They are powered by batteries. Yes, nowadays, electrical bicycles are mainly our transportation and every family has two or three of them. Electrical bicycles are very convenient when you go somewhere in the city, because they don't need a parking space and you don't have to worry about whether you violate the traffic rules. Additionally, this is my city and it's a medium-sized city in China. Shanghai is six hundred kilometers away from here and it is in our southeast direction.
To be honest, these past days, I almost didn't see a single day with blue skies. Here in autumn, we can see the beautiful weather with blue skies and white clouds. According to my experience, it does have nice weather during this period, but I don't know why they disappeared.
Living in the suburbs of a big city is the best choice in my opinion, because you can enjoy both the prosperity of the city and the peace of the suburbs. Living in the suburbs can make people feel comfortable because there are no high rise buildings around. You won't feel depressed. Besides, the air quality in the suburbs is much better than in cities because there are fewer cars to pollute the air.
Yes, we also use a star system to rate hotels and the highest star rating is five-stars. The hotel we stayed at is just an ordinary hotel in our city. The standard room costs about 120 RMB per night. In our city, Fuyang, there are about three or four five-star hotels. One of them is Howard Johnson Tianzhu Hotel and its room price range is from 470 to 670 RMB per night.
This picture was taken while we held the theory lessons. Yes, there are fewer women in the class, but it doesn't mean that this field is not popular with women. The students are all farmers, so even if they are all men, each man definitely has a wife, so the fact that fewer women attend this class doesn't mean that women are not involved in this field. There is no company involved in this issue. Our department is a public institution funded by our nation and all the training fees are paid by our local financial department.
Yeah, you could say this. But I am not the only person who organizes and holds the training. We are a team and each one has his own responsibility.
I don't need to pay for my own accommodation because we stand for our government to conduct people's living activities and all the expenses of the training are paid by our government.
That is really my bad. At first I did think about whether it was appropriate to send the room picture including my colleagues to you. I once thought of mosaicing their faces, but finally I didn't do that because I want you to see the original version and I think it won't be a big deal, but I do should get my colleagues' permission first, so I think I shouldn't do that again.
Journal
I don't think they are called mopeds or motorized, but are actually they arecalled electrical bicycles.
parallelism - you don't think they are called X, you think they are called Y.
They are powered by batteries.
Yes, nowadays, electrical bicycles are our mainly our transportation and every family has two or three of them.
Electrical bicycles are very convenient when you go somewhere in the city, because they don't need a parking space and you don't have to worry about whether you violate the traffic rules.
Additionally, this is my city and it's a medium-sized city in China.
Shanghai is six hundred kilometers away from here and it is in our southeast directionsoutheast from here.
To be honest, in these past few days, I almost didhaven't seen a single day with blue skies.
pay attention to past/present tense
Here, in autumn, we can see the beautiful weather with blue skies and white clouds.
According to my experience, itwe does have nice weather during this period, but I don't know why they disappearede don't have such weather now.
We usually don't use the word disappear to describe weather patterns.
Living in the suburbs of a big city is the best choice in my opinion, because you can enjoy both the prosperity of the city and the peace of the suburbs.
Living in the suburbs can make people feel comfortable because there are no high rise buildings around.
You won't feel depressed.
Besides, the air quality in the suburbs is much better than in cities because there are fewer cars to pollute the air.
Yes, we also use a star system to rate hotels and the highest star rating is five-stars.
The hotel we stayed at is just an ordinary hotel in our city.
TheA standard room costs about 120 RMB per night.
We usually use "the" when there is only one of the object or when we are referring to a very specific object.
We use "a" when we are speaking on general terms.
In our city, Fuyang, there are about three or four five-star hotels.
One of them is Howard Johnson Tianzhu Hotel and its room price range is from 470 to 670 RMB per night.
This picture was taken while we held the theory lessons.
Yes, there are fewer women in the class, but it doesn't mean that this field is not popular with women.
The students are all farmers, so even if they are all men, each man definitely has a wife, so the fact that fewer women attend this class doesn't mean that women are not involved in this field.
There is no company involved in this issue.
Our department is a public institution funded by our nation and all the training fees are paid by our local financial department.
Yeah, you could say this.
But I am not the only person who organizes and holds the training.
We are a team and each one has his own responsibility.
I don't need to pay for my own accommodations because we stand for our government to conduct people's living activities and all the expenses of the training are paid by our government.
I am not sure what you mean by "we stand for our government to conduct people's living activities"..... Do you mean "we expect the government to finance our costs of living"?
That is really my bad.
At first I did think about whether it was appropriate to send the room picture, which includinges my colleagues, to you.
I conce thought of mosaicsidered blurring their faces, but finally I didn't do that because I want you to see the original version and. I think it won't be a big deal, but I do should get my colleagues' permission first, so. So, I think I shouldn't do that again.
*considered blurring
mosaic is a type of filter, but mosaicing is not an actual word, though I understand what you mean.
we usually just say "blur" their face
May 22, 2021
Good job. I also think that living in the suburbs is better than living in the city lol.
May 22, 2021
I don't need to pay for my own accommodations because we stand for our government to conduct people's living activities and all the expenses of the training are paid by our government.
“We represent our government to hold the people’s livelihoods project” is what I was trying to say.
May 22, 2021
Thank you very much. I learned a new word “blurry”, blurry someone’s face in a picture.
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That is really my bad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I am not the only person who organizes and holds the training. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We are a team and each one has his own responsibility. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't need to pay for my own accommodation because we stand for our government to conduct people's living activities and all the expenses of the training are paid by our government. I don't need to pay for my own accommodations because we stand for our government to conduct people's living activities and all the expenses of the training are paid by our government. I am not sure what you mean by "we stand for our government to conduct people's living activities"..... Do you mean "we expect the government to finance our costs of living"? |
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Journal This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't think they are called mopeds or motorized, actually they are electrical bicycles. I don't think they are called mopeds or motorized, but are actually parallelism - you don't think they are called X, you think they are called Y. |
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They are powered by batteries. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes, nowadays, electrical bicycles are mainly our transportation and every family has two or three of them. Yes, nowadays, electrical bicycles are our main |
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Electrical bicycles are very convenient when you go somewhere in the city, because they don't need a parking space and you don't have to worry about whether you violate the traffic rules. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Additionally, this is my city and it's a medium-sized city in China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Shanghai is six hundred kilometers away from here and it is in our southeast direction. Shanghai is six hundred kilometers away |
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To be honest, these past days, I almost didn't see a single day with blue skies. To be honest, in th pay attention to past/present tense |
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Here in autumn, we can see the beautiful weather with blue skies and white clouds. Here, in autumn, we can see the beautiful weather with blue skies and white clouds. |
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According to my experience, it does have nice weather during this period, but I don't know why they disappeared. According to my experience, We usually don't use the word disappear to describe weather patterns. |
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Living in the suburbs of a big city is the best choice in my opinion, because you can enjoy both the prosperity of the city and the peace of the suburbs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Living in the suburbs can make people feel comfortable because there are no high rise buildings around. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You won't feel depressed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides, the air quality in the suburbs is much better than in cities because there are fewer cars to pollute the air. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes, we also use a star system to rate hotels and the highest star rating is five-stars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The hotel we stayed at is just an ordinary hotel in our city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The standard room costs about 120 RMB per night.
We usually use "the" when there is only one of the object or when we are referring to a very specific object. We use "a" when we are speaking on general terms. |
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In our city, Fuyang, there are about three or four five-star hotels. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One of them is Howard Johnson Tianzhu Hotel and its room price range is from 470 to 670 RMB per night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This picture was taken while we held the theory lessons. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes, there are fewer women in the class, but it doesn't mean that this field is not popular with women. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The students are all farmers, so even if they are all men, each man definitely has a wife, so the fact that fewer women attend this class doesn't mean that women are not involved in this field. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is no company involved in this issue. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our department is a public institution funded by our nation and all the training fees are paid by our local financial department. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yeah, you could say this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At first I did think about whether it was appropriate to send the room picture including my colleagues to you. At first I did think about whether it was appropriate to send the room picture, which includ |
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I once thought of mosaicing their faces, but finally I didn't do that because I want you to see the original version and I think it won't be a big deal, but I do should get my colleagues' permission first, so I think I shouldn't do that again. I con *considered blurring mosaic is a type of filter, but mosaicing is not an actual word, though I understand what you mean. we usually just say "blur" their face |
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