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Jack

May 18, 2021

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You are right, Manzhouli is located in the Hulunbeier prairie, with vast land and sparsely populated areas. I noticed that when you read the words "满洲里", it sounded perfect, as if you were speaking in your mother tongue.
The primary industry of Manzhouli is animal husbandry, because it is in the grassland.
Yes, each lightning is unique and, like each of us, can't be copied.
Through your description, I can imagine the color and the appearance of the Northern Lights. When you talked about the beliefs of the locals about the Northern Lights, I suddenly felt it was mysterious and sacred, and I felt awe.
I know the Dead Sea, because of its high salt content, people won't sink in it, but I never knew that there was a mineral pool similar to the Dead Sea in Canada. If I were there, I think I would definitely try it out because it would be very interesting.
I checked some information and found that there were three "dead seas" in China. One is the salt lake in Yunchen, Shanxi, and it is formed naturally. The other two are semi-artificial, that is, excavating the underground salt water hot spring to form the effect of the Dead Sea. One is in Suining, Sichuan, and the other is in Sanshui, Foshan, Guangdong.
Yes, you sent a picture of this place last winter and it looked icy and snowy, very depressed. Now it looks much better: the ice has melted, the water flows and you can smell the breath of spring.
Spring is always beautiful. It means warmth, hope and life. Let's embrace the spring tightly.

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You are right, Manzhouli is located in the Hulunbeier prairie, with vast land and sparsely populated areas.

I noticed that when you read the words "满洲里", it sounded perfect, as if you were speaking in your mother tongue.

The primary industry of Manzhouli is animal husbandry, because it is in the grassland.

Yes, each lightning is unique and, like each of us, can't be copied.

Through your description, I can imagine the color and the appearance of the Northern Lights.

When you talked about the beliefs of the locals about the Northern Lights, I suddenly felt it was mysterious and sacred, and I felt awe.

I know the Dead Sea, because of its high salt content, people won't sink in it, but I never knew that there was a mineral pool similar to the Dead Sea in Canada.

If I were there, I think I would definitely try it out because it would be very interesting.

I checked some information and found that there were three "dead seas" in China.

One is the salt lake in Yunchen, Shanxi, and it is formed naturally.

The other two are semi-artificial, that is, excavating the underground salt water hot spring to form the effect of the Dead Sea.

One is in Suining, Sichuan, and the other is in Sanshui, Foshan, Guangdong.

Yes, you sent a picture of this place last winter and it looked icy and snowy, very depresseding.

You would use depressed if you were saying how you felt. For example: I felt depressed.

Now it looks much better: the ice has melted, the water flows and you can smell the breath of spring.

Spring is always beautiful.

It means warmth, hope and life.

Let's embrace the spring tightly.

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Jack

May 24, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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passion123

May 24, 2021

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Thank you very much.

No problem!

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You are right, Manzhouli is located in the Hulunbeier prairie, with vast land and sparsely populated areas.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I noticed that when you read the words "满洲里", it sounded perfect, as if you were speaking in your mother tongue.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The primary industry of Manzhouli is animal husbandry, because it is in the grassland.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yes, each lightning is unique and, like each of us, can't be copied.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Through your description, I can imagine the color and the appearance of the Northern Lights.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When you talked about the beliefs of the locals about the Northern Lights, I suddenly felt it was mysterious and sacred, and I felt awe.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know the Dead Sea, because of its high salt content, people won't sink in it, but I never knew that there was a mineral pool similar to the Dead Sea in Canada.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I were there, I think I would definitely try it out because it would be very interesting.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I checked some information and found that there were three "dead seas" in China.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One is the salt lake in Yunchen, Shanxi, and it is formed naturally.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The other two are semi-artificial, that is, excavating the underground salt water hot spring to form the effect of the Dead Sea.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One is in Suining, Sichuan, and the other is in Sanshui, Foshan, Guangdong.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yes, you sent a picture of this place last winter and it looked icy and snowy, very depressed.


Yes, you sent a picture of this place last winter and it looked icy and snowy, very depresseding.

You would use depressed if you were saying how you felt. For example: I felt depressed.

Now it looks much better: the ice has melted, the water flows and you can smell the breath of spring.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Spring is always beautiful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It means warmth, hope and life.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let's embrace the spring tightly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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