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Thanks to Jason for creating this group and inviting me in. I used to be in the Hefei Cultural Group and had a good time, but because I am not living in Hefei city and can't join those social activities, I had fewer and fewer topics there, and finally I left that group. Later on, Jason told me that he wanted to create a Non-Hefei Living Group for all of us who don't live in Hefei city. I was not serious about the proposal because I thought it would be a load for Jason, but now he did it and let me in, so I am really excited about seeing all of the happenings. I am an enthusiastic English learner, and I think so do you. Let's get along with each other, study together, share interesting things together and make progress together. Again, thanks to Jason for creating this group and having us together.

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Thanks to Jason for creating this group and inviting me to join.

I used to be inpart of the Hefei Cultural Group and had a good time, which was very fun, but ,because I am not living in Hefei city and can't join thosgo to the social activities, I had fewer and fewer topics anymore, I spent less time there, and fineventually I left that group.

Later on, Jason told me that he wanted to create a Non-Hefei Living Group for all of us who don't live in Hefei city.

I was not serious about the proposaldidn’t like the idea at first because I thought it would be a loadt of work for Jason, but now he did it and let me join, so I a’m really excited about seeinggoing to all of the happeningevents.

I am an enthusiastic English learner, and I think so do you.

Let'sWe get along with each other, study together, share our interesting things togethers and make progress together.

Again, thanks to Jason for creating this group and having us together.

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May 16, 2021

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Thanks to Jason for creating this group and inviting me in.

Thanks to Jason for creating this group and inviting me to join.

I used to be in the Hefei Cultural Group and had a good time, but because I am not living in Hefei city and can't join those social activities, I had fewer and fewer topics there, and finally I left that group.

I used to be inpart of the Hefei Cultural Group and had a good time, which was very fun, but ,because I am not living in Hefei city and can't join thosgo to the social activities, I had fewer and fewer topics anymore, I spent less time there, and fineventually I left that group.

Later on, Jason told me that he wanted to create a Non-Hefei Living Group for all of us who don't live in Hefei city.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was not serious about the proposal because I thought it would be a load for Jason, but now he did it and let me in, so I am really excited about seeing all of the happenings.

I was not serious about the proposaldidn’t like the idea at first because I thought it would be a loadt of work for Jason, but now he did it and let me join, so I a’m really excited about seeinggoing to all of the happeningevents.

I am an enthusiastic English learner, and I think so do you.

I am an enthusiastic English learner, and I think so do you.

Let's get along with each other, study together, share interesting things together and make progress together.

Let'sWe get along with each other, study together, share our interesting things togethers and make progress together.

Again, thanks to Jason for creating this group and having us together.

Again, thanks to Jason for creating this group and having us together.

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