Jack's avatar
Jack

May 15, 2021

0
Journal

First of all, I think all you have done is right as long as you don't affect others.
Everyone has their own lifestyle and we should give them respect.
Doing things you like is the happiest thing in one's life.
Learning can always make me happy. Since I started learning English, I have never felt bored, and time always passes unconscious.
I am very glad to receive your messages because I am able to learn some new vocabulary and explanations every time. After receiving your voice messages, I first dictate them out, then repeat your messages again and again. I think this is a simple but effective way to learn spoken English.
So thank you for learning languages with me and exchanging ideas with me, and I am very grateful that you gave me the chance to learn English.

Corrections

Journal

First of all, I think all you have done isr actions are right as long as youthey don't affectharm others.

"Affect" doesn't specify whether your impact on other people was good or bad, so I think "harm" conveys your meaning better.

Everyone has their own lifestyle and we should give them respect.

Doing the things you like is the happiest thing in one's lifekey to happiness.

Learning can always makes me happy.

SEver since I started learning English, I have never felt bored, and time always passes unconsciouflies.

"Time flies when you're having fun" is a saying that I think captures what you mean here.

I am very glad to receive your messages because I am able to learn some new vocabulary and (read/hear) your explanations every time.

After receiving your voice messages, I first dictate them out, then repeat your messagesthem again and again.

I think this is a simple but effective way to learn spoken English.

So thank you for learning languages with me and exchanging ideas with me, and I am very grateful that you gaive me the chance to learn English.

Using the past tense of "give" makes it sound a little like you're saying goodbye.

Feedback

This was a very nice sounding message.

Jack's avatar
Jack

May 15, 2021

0

I am very glad to receive your messages because I am able to learn some new vocabulary and (read/hear) your explanations every time.

Expressions.

0

Journal

Everyone has their own lifestyle and we should give them respect them.

Learning can always makes me happy.

Since I started learning English, I have never felt bored, and time always passes unconsciously.

I am very glad to receive your messages because I am able to learn some new vocabulary and explanations every time.

I think this is a simple but effective way to learn spoken English.

So thank you for learning languages with me and exchanging ideas with me, and I am very grateful that you gave me the chance to learn English.

Jack's avatar
Jack

May 15, 2021

0

Thank you very much.

Journal


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First of all, I think all you have done is right as long as you don't affect others.


First of all, I think all you have done isr actions are right as long as youthey don't affectharm others.

"Affect" doesn't specify whether your impact on other people was good or bad, so I think "harm" conveys your meaning better.

Everyone has their own lifestyle and we should give them respect.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Everyone has their own lifestyle and we should give them respect them.

Doing things you like is the happiest thing in one's life.


Doing the things you like is the happiest thing in one's lifekey to happiness.

Learning can always make me happy.


Learning can always makes me happy.

Learning can always makes me happy.

Since I started learning English, I have never felt bored, and time always passes unconscious.


Since I started learning English, I have never felt bored, and time always passes unconsciously.

SEver since I started learning English, I have never felt bored, and time always passes unconsciouflies.

"Time flies when you're having fun" is a saying that I think captures what you mean here.

I am very glad to receive your messages because I am able to learn some new vocabulary and explanations every time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am very glad to receive your messages because I am able to learn some new vocabulary and (read/hear) your explanations every time.

After receiving your voice messages, I first dictate them out, then repeat your messages again and again.


After receiving your voice messages, I first dictate them out, then repeat your messagesthem again and again.

I think this is a simple but effective way to learn spoken English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So thank you for learning languages with me and exchanging ideas with me, and I am very grateful that you gave me the chance to learn English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So thank you for learning languages with me and exchanging ideas with me, and I am very grateful that you gaive me the chance to learn English.

Using the past tense of "give" makes it sound a little like you're saying goodbye.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium