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My city is located in the central and eastern plains of China and its natural scenery is not outstanding. Generally speaking, the southeast part of China has better natural scenery with mountains, rivers and sea. But the northwest part of China is relatively poor with desert and Gobi in the majority. This area is in urban areas. Because similar places are everywhere in the city, it looks like there are only a few people there. After all, Fuyang is not a tourist city. I think the natural scenery in other provinces is not worse than ours because everywhere is developing now. The city crowd is mainly concentrated in the commercial gathering areas. I will shoot for you in the future. It can be said that there is a lot of traffic.

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My city is located in the central and eastern plains of China and its natural scenery is not outstanding.

But the northwest part of China ihas relatively poor with desert and Gobi in the majorityscenery being mostly covered by the Gobi Desert.

This area is in urban areas.

Because similar places are everywhereeverywhere looks similar in the city, it lookseems like there are only a few people there.

After all, Fuyang is not a tourist city.

I think the natural scenery in other provinces is not worse than ours because everywhere is developing now.

The city crowd is mainly concentrated in the commercial gathering areas.

I will shootake some pictures of it for you in the future.

Do you mean shooting pictures?

It can be would saidy that there is a lot of traffic.

Alternatively,

It has been said that there is a lot of traffic.

You could say that there is a lot of traffic.

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Jack

May 14, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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My city is located in the central and eastern plains of China and its natural scenery is not outstanding.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Generally speaking, the southeast part of China has better natural scenery with mountains, rivers and sea.


This area is in urban areas.


This area is in urban areas.

But the northwest part of China is relatively poor with desert and Gobi in the majority.


But the northwest part of China ihas relatively poor with desert and Gobi in the majorityscenery being mostly covered by the Gobi Desert.

I will shoot for you in the future.


I will shootake some pictures of it for you in the future.

Do you mean shooting pictures?

Because similar places are everywhere in the city, it looks like there are only a few people there.


Because similar places are everywhereeverywhere looks similar in the city, it lookseems like there are only a few people there.

After all, Fuyang is not a tourist city.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think the natural scenery in other provinces is not worse than ours because everywhere is developing now.


I think the natural scenery in other provinces is not worse than ours because everywhere is developing now.

The city crowd is mainly concentrated in the commercial gathering areas.


The city crowd is mainly concentrated in the commercial gathering areas.

It can be said that there is a lot of traffic.


It can be would saidy that there is a lot of traffic.

Alternatively, It has been said that there is a lot of traffic. You could say that there is a lot of traffic.

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