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May 11, 2021

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It is midnight now and I am in the hospital with my mom. She has been hospitalized for a few days. Although there is no fatal problem with her body, because she is too old, I have to stay with her every day.
When people get old, they are more likely to behave like kids because their intelligence declines. Tonight I am not able to sleep. She couldn't sleep peacefully and I had to pay attention to her every small move. Now, she gets on my bed, so I can only sit on the chair beside the bed. Mom had become old. She couldn't take care of herself. There were always some health issues with her body. Besides, she also had senile dementia. Facing aging, we could do nothing. I only hope she has a happy life in her late years and I should treat her well. God bless her.

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It is midnight now, and I am in the hospital with my mom.

She has been hospitalized for a few days.

Although there is no fatal problem with her body, because she is too old, I have to stay with her every day.

When people get old, they are more likely to behave like kids because their intelligence declines.

Tonight I am not able to sleep.

She couldn't sleep peacefully, and I had to pay attention to her every small move.

Now, she getsis getting on my bed, so I can only sit on the chair beside the bed.

Mom had become old.

She couldn't take care of herself.

There were always some health issues with her body.

Besides, she also had senile dementia.

Facing aging, we could do nothing.

I only hope she has a happy life in her late years, and I should treat her well.

God bless her.

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Jack

May 12, 2021

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It is midnight now and I am in the hospital with my mom.


It is midnight now, and I am in the hospital with my mom.

She has been hospitalized for a few days.


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Although there is no fatal problem with her body, because she is too old, I have to stay with her every day.


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When people get old, they are more likely to behave like kids because their intelligence declines.


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Tonight I am not able to sleep.


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She couldn't sleep peacefully and I had to pay attention to her every small move.


She couldn't sleep peacefully, and I had to pay attention to her every small move.

Now, she gets on my bed, so I can only sit on the chair beside the bed.


Now, she getsis getting on my bed, so I can only sit on the chair beside the bed.

Mom had become old.


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She couldn't take care of herself.


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There were always some health issues with her body.


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Besides, she also had senile dementia.


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Facing aging, we could do nothing.


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I only hope she has a happy life in her late years and I should treat her well.


I only hope she has a happy life in her late years, and I should treat her well.

God bless her.


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