May 11, 2021
Journal
The Chinese rose is our city flower, and now it is in full bloom. It is so beautiful.
In summer, I think there should be an alternate weather between clear and cloudy. The air quality in our region is at a medium level in China, not too bad nor too good. But I think the air quality where you live must be the best.
Compared with other seasons, our summer is humid. If the clothes in the cabinet are not taken out to dry, they may be moldy. You may have heard of the mildewy rain season in China, that is, when Jiangnan plums are ripe, it is rainy and humid during this period.
I didn't expect you to go to so many places. Strictly speaking, I have not been abroad. I only visited Hong Kong and Macau once in 2010 or 2011. If it is now, I don’t even have the qualifications to go to Hong Kong and Macau, because the country now controls public officials very strictly. Unless there are immediate family members overseas and you need to visit them, you are not allowed to go abroad.
I checked the information and said that the maximum temperature of the cement pavement in summer can reach more than 80 degrees. In this way, the eggs can almost be cooked.
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The Chinese rose is our city flower, and now it is in full bloom.
It is so beautiful.
In summer, I think there should be an alternative weather between clear and cloudy.
A native would have written what you wrote too, I think.
The air quality in our region in China is at a medium level in China, not too bad nor too good.
But I think the air quality where you live must be the bestbetter.
the best = in the whole world
better = compared to your region of China
Compared with other seasons, our summer is humid.
If theyour clothes in the cabinet are not taken out to dry, they may bget/become moldy.
'your' here is impersonal, referring to anybody
You may have heard of the mildewy rain season in China,; that is, when Jiangnan plums are ripe, iripen. It is rainy and humid during this period.
I didn't expect you to gohave been to so many places.
I'm guessing here. 'have been' refers to past travel, before the time your pen-pal wrote you, whereas 'go' as you initially would refer to something that happened after the time of writing.
Strictly speaking, I have not been abroad.
I only visited Hong Kong and Macau once in 2010 or 2011.
If it is nowThese days, I don’t even have the qualifications to go to Hong Kong and Macau, because the country now controls public officials very strictly.
Are you a public official? If you are, then this sentence is correct. If not, I would replace 'public officials' with 'travel' or 'travel within the country', which is how I first understood the sentence. (But I was making assumptions.)
Unless there are immediate family members overseas and you need to visit them, you are not allowed to go abroad.
I checked the information and said that the maximum temperature of the cement pavement in summer can reach more than 80 degrees.
This isn't incorrect, but I would specify which information. So maybe 'I checked the weather forecast' or 'I checked Wikipedia'.
Because from 'the information' it's not exactly clear what you're talking about.
InAt this way, thetemperature, eggs can almost be cooked.
'The eggs' would be referring to specific eggs, whereas just 'eggs' refers to eggs in general
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Your entries here are interesting to read! Where'd you find a penpal?
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Compared with other seasons, our summer is humid. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Journal This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Chinese rose is our city flower, and now it is in full bloom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is so beautiful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In summer, I think there should be an alternate weather between clear and cloudy. In summer, I think there should be an alternative weather between clear and cloudy. A native would have written what you wrote too, I think. |
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The air quality in our region is at a medium level in China, not too bad nor too good. The air quality in our region in China is at a medium level |
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But I think the air quality where you live must be the best. But I think the air quality where you live must be the best = in the whole world better = compared to your region of China |
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If the clothes in the cabinet are not taken out to dry, they may be moldy. If 'your' here is impersonal, referring to anybody |
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You may have heard of the mildewy rain season in China, that is, when Jiangnan plums are ripe, it is rainy and humid during this period. You may have heard of the mildewy rain season in China |
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I didn't expect you to go to so many places. I didn't expect you to I'm guessing here. 'have been' refers to past travel, before the time your pen-pal wrote you, whereas 'go' as you initially would refer to something that happened after the time of writing. |
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Strictly speaking, I have not been abroad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I only visited Hong Kong and Macau once in 2010 or 2011. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If it is now, I don’t even have the qualifications to go to Hong Kong and Macau, because the country now controls public officials very strictly.
Are you a public official? If you are, then this sentence is correct. If not, I would replace 'public officials' with 'travel' or 'travel within the country', which is how I first understood the sentence. (But I was making assumptions.) |
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Unless there are immediate family members overseas and you need to visit them, you are not allowed to go abroad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I checked the information and said that the maximum temperature of the cement pavement in summer can reach more than 80 degrees. I checked the information and said that the maximum temperature of the cement pavement in summer can reach more than 80 degrees. This isn't incorrect, but I would specify which information. So maybe 'I checked the weather forecast' or 'I checked Wikipedia'. Because from 'the information' it's not exactly clear what you're talking about. |
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In this way, the eggs can almost be cooked.
'The eggs' would be referring to specific eggs, whereas just 'eggs' refers to eggs in general |
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