May 10, 2021
Journal
The croaking of frogs in the first video evoked my distant memories, and it reminded me of the scene in the summer nights in the countryside when I was a child. Summer night breeze, croaking of frogs in a pond, and the villagers in trees shadows to take cool after a whole day's hard work. What a nice idyllic scene.
The second video reminded me of Anshun in Guizhou province , where the famous Huangguoshu Waterfall is located. The waterfall in the video is almost the same as those in Anshun. It makes you feel refreshed after watching it. Meanwhile, Anshun is also a famous summer resort, where the temperature in summer doesn't exceed 30 degrees Celsius because it is a plateau, so the temperature is low.
Journal
The croaking of frogs in the first video evoked my distant memories of mine, and it reminded me of the scene in the summer nights in the countryside when I was a child.
If you say "the scene" in this context, that suggests it only happened once rather than multiple times.
SA summer night breeze, the croaking of frogs in a pond, and the villagers in trees shadows to take coolcooling off in the shade of some trees after a whole day's hard work.
What a nice idyllic scene.
The second video reminded me of Anshun in Guizhou province , where the famous Huangguoshu Waterfall is located.
The waterfall in the video is almost the same as those in Anshun.
It makes you feel refreshed after watching it.
Meanwhile, Anshun is also a famous summer resort, where the temperature in summer doesn't exceed 30 degrees Celsius because it is a plateau, so the temperature is low.
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Very nice! This journal entry is great, and I particularly liked your use of the word "idyllic", which you used in precisely the right context.
May 10, 2021
Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.
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The croaking of frogs in the first video evoked my distant memories, and it reminded me of the scene in the summer nights in the countryside when I was a child. The croaking of frogs in the first video evoked If you say "the scene" in this context, that suggests it only happened once rather than multiple times. |
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Summer night breeze, croaking of frogs in a pond, and the villagers in trees shadows to take cool after a whole day's hard work.
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What a nice idyllic scene. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The second video reminded me of Anshun in Guizhou province , where the famous Huangguoshu Waterfall is located. The second video reminded me of Anshun in Guizhou province |
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The waterfall in the video is almost the same as those in Anshun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It makes you feel refreshed after watching it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Meanwhile, Anshun is also a famous summer resort, where the temperature in summer doesn't exceed 30 degrees Celsius because it is a plateau, so the temperature is low. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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