May 9, 2021
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The city you grew up in looks very nice. Green area, lush trees, clean river, blue sky and the snow mountains in the distance. It makes me feel pretty quiet, peaceful and satisfied. I prefer living in an area that has fewer buildings and people. Compared with cities, I prefer living in small towns in the suburbs because I like a very quiet environment.
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The city you grew up in looks very nice.
GA green area, with lush trees, a clean river, a blue sky and the snow mountains in the distance.
Mainly stylistic corrections. This would make the sentence sound better and more natural.
If you wanted to keep the original sentence you could say: "Green area, lush trees, clean river, blue sky and snow mountains in the distance."
It makes me feel pretty quiet, peaceful and satisfied.
One cannot 'feel quiet'
You can say 'It causes me to be quiet and feel peaceful and satisfied.'
I prefer living in an area that has fewer buildings and people.
Compared with cities, I prefer living in small towns in the suburbs because I like a very quiet environment.
May 11, 2021
Thank you very much.
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It makes me feel pretty quiet, peaceful and satisfied. It makes me feel One cannot 'feel quiet' You can say 'It causes me to be quiet and feel peaceful and satisfied.' |
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I prefer living in an area that has fewer buildings and people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Compared with cities, I prefer living in small towns in the suburbs because I like a very quiet environment. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Journal This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The city you grew up in looks very nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Green area, lush trees, clean river, blue sky and the snow mountains in the distance.
Mainly stylistic corrections. This would make the sentence sound better and more natural. If you wanted to keep the original sentence you could say: "Green area, lush trees, clean river, blue sky and snow mountains in the distance." |
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