May 8, 2021
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It was about 2018. My first apartment was getting older, and I decided to buy a new one to live in for the rest of my life. This time, I would like to buy an apartment that has the best location and perfect environment. After several round comparisons, I finally chose to focus on the new southern city area. It was said that the local government would move there. In the center of this area, there was a big lake called Shuangqing Bay Park, and there were a lot of trees, flowers and grass in it. The natural environment was really nice. Around the park, there was the Fuyang Grand Theater, Fuyang Science and Technology Museum, Fuyang Library Museum, Fuyang Museum, Fuyang Planning Museum and Fuyang Citizen Service Center. The residential buildings community I chose to buy an apartment in was called Lifeng Triumphal Arch, and it was located in the northeast part of the lake. I think it is the best place in this area. It seems that everyone knew this, including the Lifeng real estate owner, so the apartment price was the highest one at that time in the whole city. Because the apartment price was not allowed to reach out of the limit given by the local government, the apartment developer had to increase the price of the parking space. You had to buy a parking space if you wanted to buy an apartment there. Thus, a single parking space of just 8 or 9 square meters was sold for a price of 300 thousand yuan. This apartment covers an area of 120 square meters and costs me nearly 1500thousand yuan. This is the most expensive apartment I have ever bought, but it is also an apartment in the best location and has the best environment. Now, when I sit on my balcony, the whole park is in my eyes.
Journal
It was about 2018.
My first apartment was getting older, and I decided to buy a new one to live in for the rest of my life.
This time, I would like to buy an apartment that has the best location and perfect environment.
After several rounds of comparisons, I finally chose to focus on the new southern city area.
It was said that the local government would move there.
Unclear what you mean here - like the entire government would take over that space?
In the center of this area, there was a big lake called Shuangqing Bay Park, and there were a lot of trees, flowers and grass in it.
The natural environment was really nice.
Around the park, there was the Fuyang Grand Theater, Fuyang Science and Technology Museum, Fuyang Library Museum, Fuyang Museum, Fuyang Planning Museum and Fuyang Citizen Service Center.
The residential buildings community I chose to buy an apartment in was called Lifeng Triumphal Arch, and it was located in the northeast part of the lake.
I think it is the best place in this area.
It seems that everyone knew this, including the Llifelong real estate owner, so the apartment price was the highest one at that time in the whole city at the time.
Because the apartment price was not allowed to reach out ofexceed the limit givenset by the local government, the apartment developer had to increase the price of the parking space.
You had to buy a parking space if you wanted to buy an apartment there.
Thus, a single parking space of just 8 or 9 square meters was sold for a price of 300 thousand yuan.
This apartment coversed an area of 120 square meters and costs me nearly 1500 thousand yuan.
Now, when I sit on my balcony, I have a view of the whole park is in my eyes.
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My first apartment was getting older, and I decided to buy a new one to live in for the rest of my life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This time, I would like to buy an apartment that has the best location and perfect environment. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After several round comparisons, I finally chose to focus on the new southern city area. After several rounds of comparison |
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It was said that the local government would move there. It was said that the local government would move there. Unclear what you mean here - like the entire government would take over that space? |
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In the center of this area, there was a big lake called Shuangqing Bay Park, and there were a lot of trees, flowers and grass in it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The natural environment was really nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Around the park, there was the Fuyang Grand Theater, Fuyang Science and Technology Museum, Fuyang Library Museum, Fuyang Museum, Fuyang Planning Museum and Fuyang Citizen Service Center. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The residential buildings community I chose to buy an apartment in was called Lifeng Triumphal Arch, and it was located in the northeast part of the lake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think it is the best place in this area. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It seems that everyone knew this, including the Lifeng real estate owner, so the apartment price was the highest one at that time in the whole city. It seems that everyone knew this, including the |
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Because the apartment price was not allowed to reach out of the limit given by the local government, the apartment developer had to increase the price of the parking space. Because the apartment price was not allowed to |
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You had to buy a parking space if you wanted to buy an apartment there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thus, a single parking space of just 8 or 9 square meters was sold for a price of 300 thousand yuan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This apartment covers an area of 120 square meters and costs me nearly 1500thousand yuan. This apartment cover |
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This is the most expensive apartment I have ever bought, but it is also an apartment in the best location and has the best environment. |
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Now, when I sit on my balcony, the whole park is in my eyes. Now, when I sit on my balcony, I have a view of the whole park |
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