May 2, 2021
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China has four famous ancient West Lakes, and Yingzhou West Lake is one. The other three are Hangzhou West Lake, Yangzhou West Lake and Huizhou West Lake. Yingzhou West Lake is divided into Southern Lake and Northern Lake by Fulin Road. Through three years of reconstruction, the Southern Lake has been reopened to people since Labor Day. The South Lake covers an area of about 3 square kilometers. According to the impression I got this morning, the scenery mainly includes the following aspects. Of course, there are many small or large lakes in this area. Then some trees, grass, flowers, wood long chairs, stone or wood bridges and some pavilions. Fortunately, so far I have visited these four famous West Lakes. To be honest, Hangzhou West Lake is at the top one place due to its own beauty, multilayered mountain's background and the plenty of greenery around the lake. Huizhou West Lake and Yangzhou West Lake are also not bad, but the latter is located in a plain area. There are no mountains aside, and it can't even actually be called a lake. It's just a section of a river branch. Among them, Yingzhou West Lake may be the least well-known one, but Ouyang Xiu and Su Shi, two great ancient writers, wrote many famous poems about the lake when they were satraps in Yingzhou. However, the newly built Yingzhou West Lake is still a good place for citizens to go sightseeing. Especially those Chinese roses on both sides of Yinghuai Avenue and those big tall lush roadside trees. The Chinese roses are fully blooming now, colorful and dense. I strongly recommend you go to feel their beauty.
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China has four famous ancient West Lakes, and Yingzhou West Lake is one.
The other three are Hangzhou West Lake, Yangzhou West Lake and Huizhou West Lake.
Yingzhou West Lake is divided into Southern Lake and Northern Lake by Fulin Road.
Through three years of reconstruction, the Southern Lake has been reopened to people since Labor Day.
The South Lake covers an area of about 3 square kilometers.
According to the impression I got this morning, the scenery mainly includes the following aspects.
Of course, there are many small or large lakes in this area.
Then some trees, grass, flowers, wood longlong wood chairs, stone or wood bridges and some pavilions.
Fortunately, so far I haveI have already visited these four famous West Lakes.
What you wrote is correct but this is also another option.
To be honest, Hangzhou West Lake is at the top one placebest place to visit due to its own beauty, multilayered mountain's background and the plenty of greenery around the lake.
Huizhou West Lake and Yangzhou West Lake are also not bad, but the latter is located in a plain area.
There are no mountains asidesurrounding it, and it can't even actually be called a lake.
It's just a section of a river branch.
Among them, Yingzhou West Lake may be the least well-known one, but Ouyang Xiu and Su Shi, two great ancient writers, wrote many famous poems about the lake when they were satraps in Yingzhou.
However, the newly built Yingzhou West Lake is still a good place for citizens to go sightseeing.
Especially those Chinese roses on both sides of Yinghuai Avenue and those big tall lush roadside trees.
The Chinese roses are fully blooming now, colorful and dense.
I strongly recommend you go to feel their beauty.
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China has four famous ancient West Lakes, and Yingzhou West Lake is one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The other three are Hangzhou West Lake, Yangzhou West Lake and Huizhou West Lake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yingzhou West Lake is divided into Southern Lake and Northern Lake by Fulin Road. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Through three years of reconstruction, the Southern Lake has been reopened to people since Labor Day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The South Lake covers an area of about 3 square kilometers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to the impression I got this morning, the scenery mainly includes the following aspects. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, there are many small or large lakes in this area. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then some trees, grass, flowers, wood long chairs, stone or wood bridges and some pavilions. Then some trees, grass, flowers, |
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Fortunately, so far I have visited these four famous West Lakes. Fortunately, What you wrote is correct but this is also another option. |
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To be honest, Hangzhou West Lake is at the top one place due to its own beauty, multilayered mountain's background and the plenty of greenery around the lake. To be honest, Hangzhou West Lake is |
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Huizhou West Lake and Yangzhou West Lake are also not bad, but the latter is located in a plain area. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are no mountains aside, and it can't even actually be called a lake. There are no mountains |
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It's just a section of a river branch. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Among them, Yingzhou West Lake may be the least well-known one, but Ouyang Xiu and Su Shi, two great ancient writers, wrote many famous poems about the lake when they were satraps in Yingzhou. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, the newly built Yingzhou West Lake is still a good place for citizens to go sightseeing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Especially those Chinese roses on both sides of Yinghuai Avenue and those big tall lush roadside trees. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Chinese roses are fully blooming now, colorful and dense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I strongly recommend you go to feel their beauty. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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