May 3, 2021
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Yesterday, when I went out of Yingzhou West Lake, I was not sure which exit I should go to. I asked a man who is older than me. I told him the approximate position my car was at. He thought for a little while and then led me there. I talked to him while we walked, and I learned that four people in total from his family had come to West Lake and he was thinking about how to return to Fuyang. I invited them to ride my car back home. He was very grateful. Because his family was not with him, we had to wait for them for a while. When we arrived in the city, he sincerely invited me to have lunch together, but I declined. This afternoon when I drove back home, it suddenly rained heavily. Two walkers had nowhere to hide. They were just running in a hurry, but that was useless. I opened my car window and called them to get into my car. Fortunately, they haven't been completely wet yet. I drove them to their destination and it was not a long distance. Their destination was both along my way. Now, I am very happy to have helped some people.
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Yesterday, when I went out of Yingzhou West Lake, I was not sure which exit I should go to.
I asked a man who is older than me.
I told him the approximate position my car was at.
He thought for a little while and then led me there.
I talked to him while we walked, and I learned that four people in total from his family had come to West Lake and he was thinking about how to return to Fuyang.
I invited them to ride my car back home and he was very grateful.
He was very grateful.
When we arrived in the city, he sincerely invited me to have lunch together, but I declined.
This afternoon when I drove back home, it suddenly rained heavily.
Two walkers had nowhere to hide and they were just running in a hurry, but that was useless.
They were just running in a hurry, but that was useless.
I opened my car window and called them to get into my car.
Fortunately, they havedn't been completely wet yet.
Haven't or have not is present tense.
I drove them to their destination and itwhich was not a long distance as it was along my way.
Their destination was both along my way.
Now, I am very happy to have helped some people.
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Yesterday, when I went out of Yingzhou West Lake, I was not sure which exit I should go to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I asked a man who is older than me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I told him the approximate position my car was at. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He thought for a little while and then led me there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I talked to him while we walked, and I learned that four people in total from his family had come to West Lake and he was thinking about how to return to Fuyang. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I invited them to ride my car back home. I invited them to ride my car back home and he was very grateful. |
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He was very grateful.
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Because his family was not with him, we had to wait for them for a while. |
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When we arrived in the city, he sincerely invited me to have lunch together, but I declined. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This afternoon when I drove back home, it suddenly rained heavily. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Two walkers had nowhere to hide. Two walkers had nowhere to hide and they were just running in a hurry, but that was useless. |
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They were just running in a hurry, but that was useless.
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I opened my car window and called them to get into my car. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fortunately, they haven't been completely wet yet. Fortunately, they ha Haven't or have not is present tense. |
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I drove them to their destination and it was not a long distance. I drove them to their destination |
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Their destination was both along my way.
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Now, I am very happy to have helped some people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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