April 30, 2021
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I heard of New York Central Park a long time ago and I have found some videos about it on the Internet since then. It is a very big public park with beautiful flowers, grass and trees. It seems there are two lakes in it. One is large, the other is smaller. The park is rectangular and is located right downtown, and is surrounded by so many big tall modern buildings. In short, it is really a amazing place.
Journal
I heard of New York Central Park a long time ago and I have found some videos about it on the Internet since then.
It is a very big public park with beautiful flowers, grass and trees.
It seems there are two lakes in it.
One is large, the other is smaller.
The park is rectangular and is located right downtown, and is surrounded by so many big tall modern buildings.
"so many" seems out of place here. It would fit if the number of buildings was the focus of the sentence: "There are so many modern buildings!" Or if you were talking about a consequence of the number: "It's surrounded by so many modern buildings that it feels like a walled garden."
I think "right downtown" might technically be ungrammatical? But colloquially it's totally fine. Formally I might prefer something like "in the middle of downtown".
In short, it is really an amazing place.
April 30, 2021
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I heard of New York Central Park a long time ago and I have found some videos about it on the Internet since then. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is a very big public park with beautiful flowers, grass and trees. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It seems there are two lakes in it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One is large, the other is smaller. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The park is rectangular and is located right downtown, and is surrounded by so many big tall modern buildings. The park is rectangular and is located right downtown, and is surrounded by "so many" seems out of place here. It would fit if the number of buildings was the focus of the sentence: "There are so many modern buildings!" Or if you were talking about a consequence of the number: "It's surrounded by so many modern buildings that it feels like a walled garden." I think "right downtown" might technically be ungrammatical? But colloquially it's totally fine. Formally I might prefer something like "in the middle of downtown". |
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In short, it is really a amazing place. In short, it is really an amazing place. |
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