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In my memory, our family had a dog when I was a child. Later on, she became old and finally died. Apart from this, I never raised pets. It's not because I don't like pets, but I don't have enough time. I also like duckings. When I was a kid living in the countryside, every family raised chicken, pigs and duckings. Duckings look very lovely, especially when they are walking. But when I left our village, I had never raised them.
Children in China nowadays are really busy, in my opinion. As you said, they need to learn a lot of things at the same time. For example, dancing, English, drawing and so on. But when I was a child in the countryside, there was no kindergarten in the countryside, so I had plenty of time to play. Even in primary school, I didn't have much homework. But nowadays, I don't know why children have too much homework to do, and I don't think it is a good thing.
I live in the Mideast part of China. There are four seasons here and they are spring, summer, autumn and winter. The highest temperature in summer can reach 38 or so degrees Celsius and the lowest temperature can reach 15 or so minus degrees Celsius. The rest of the two seasons are pretty nice. The temperature of the two seasons most likely ranges from 15 to 25 degrees Celsius.
I have been working in a public institution since I started work. Our department is focusing on agricultural and farmers training for our district (an administrative district like a county). I think my job is not bad, I like it. It's not very busy and it's relatively simple. In short, I am satisfied with it.

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In my memory, remember that our family had a dog when I was a child.

Later on,Eventually she became old and finally died.

Apart from thisher, I never raisedhad any other pets.

It's not because I don't like pets, but II just don't have enough time.

I also like ducklings.

"Also" here suggests you were already talking about other animals you like.

When I was a kid living in the countryside, every family raised chickens, pigs and ducklings.

Ducklings look very lovely, especially when they are walking.

"Walking" is good, but you can say "waddling" for ducks; it's specifically used to describe how ducks, and some other birds like penguins, walk :)

But whenby the time I left our village, I had never raised them.

Children in China nowadays are really busy, in my opinion.

As you said, tThey need to learn a lot of things at the same time.

"As you said" is typically used in conversation when someone says something, you agree and say something related, but want to reflect a point they said. For instance, Aaron says "Ducks are cute", and you say "I like chickens more, but, as you said, ducks are cute."

For example, dancing, English, drawing and so on.

But when I was a child in the countryside, there was no kindergarten in the countryside, so I had plenty of time to play.

Even in primary school, I didn't have much homework.

But nowadays, I don't know why children have toso much homework to do, and I don't think it is a good thing.

There are four seasons here and they are spring, summer, autumn and winter.

The highest temperatures in summer can reach 38 or so degrees (Celsius) or so and the lowest temperatures can reach 15 or so minusnegative 15 degrees (Celsius) or so.

Celsius is optional. We typically don't say it when speaking, unless speaking with an American and want to be clear it's Celsius.

The rest of other two seasons are pretty nice.

The temperature of the other two seasons most likely ranges from 15 to 25 degrees Celsius.

I have been working in a public institution since I started working.

Our department is focusing on agricultural and farmers training for our district (an administrative district like a county).

I think my job is not bad, I like it.

It's not very busy and it's relatively simple.

In short, I am satisfied with it.

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Jack

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In my memory, our family had a dog when I was a child.


In my memory, remember that our family had a dog when I was a child.

Later on, she became old and finally died.


Later on,Eventually she became old and finally died.

Apart from this, I never raised pets.


Apart from thisher, I never raisedhad any other pets.

It's not because I don't like pets, but I don't have enough time.


It's not because I don't like pets, but II just don't have enough time.

I also like duckings.


I also like ducklings.

"Also" here suggests you were already talking about other animals you like.

When I was a kid living in the countryside, every family raised chicken, pigs and duckings.


When I was a kid living in the countryside, every family raised chickens, pigs and ducklings.

Duckings look very lovely, especially when they are walking.


Ducklings look very lovely, especially when they are walking.

"Walking" is good, but you can say "waddling" for ducks; it's specifically used to describe how ducks, and some other birds like penguins, walk :)

But when I left our village, I had never raised them.


But whenby the time I left our village, I had never raised them.

Children in China nowadays are really busy, in my opinion.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As you said, they need to learn a lot of things at the same time.


As you said, tThey need to learn a lot of things at the same time.

"As you said" is typically used in conversation when someone says something, you agree and say something related, but want to reflect a point they said. For instance, Aaron says "Ducks are cute", and you say "I like chickens more, but, as you said, ducks are cute."

For example, dancing, English, drawing and so on.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But when I was a child in the countryside, there was no kindergarten in the countryside, so I had plenty of time to play.


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Even in primary school, I didn't have much homework.


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But nowadays, I don't know why children have too much homework to do, and I don't think it is a good thing.


But nowadays, I don't know why children have toso much homework to do, and I don't think it is a good thing.

I live in the Mideast part of China.


There are four seasons here and they are spring, summer, autumn and winter.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The highest temperature in summer can reach 38 or so degrees Celsius and the lowest temperature can reach 15 or so minus degrees Celsius.


The highest temperatures in summer can reach 38 or so degrees (Celsius) or so and the lowest temperatures can reach 15 or so minusnegative 15 degrees (Celsius) or so.

Celsius is optional. We typically don't say it when speaking, unless speaking with an American and want to be clear it's Celsius.

The rest of the two seasons are pretty nice.


The rest of other two seasons are pretty nice.

The temperature of the two seasons most likely ranges from 15 to 25 degrees Celsius.


The temperature of the other two seasons most likely ranges from 15 to 25 degrees Celsius.

I have been working in a public institution since I started work.


I have been working in a public institution since I started working.

Our department is focusing on agricultural and farmers training for our district (an administrative district like a county).


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I think my job is not bad, I like it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's not very busy and it's relatively simple.


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In short, I am satisfied with it.


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