April 12, 2021
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I traveled to 'Jin' a Southern district in South Korea, to visit my aunt's.
My aunt and I are quite close, and I was excited to visit her in a while. It was a visit in like ten years.
It is a long drive from Seoul, even by the express bus.
I packed my stuff the day before, and headed to 'Jin' on Friday afternoon.
I was a bit carsick, but traveling in the express bus was quite refreshing.
The area was pretty tropical, with tropical trees and flowers. Because of corona virus, I couldn't get around a whole lot. But, it was still nice because I got to visit a temple in a mountain and Kyungsang college.
Especially, Kyunsang college was blossoming with cherry flowers and different plants.
I ate a lot of fresh local seafoods. I hope to live in such area (near the ocean), when I retire or get married.
Journal
I traveled to 'Jin', a Southern district in South Korea, to visit my aunt's.
My aunt and I are quite close, and I was excited to visit her because I haven't seen her in a while.
It was amy first visit in like ten years.
It is a long drive from Seoul, even by the express bus.
I packed my stuff the day before, and headed to 'Jin' on Friday afternoon.
I was a bit carsick, but traveling in the express bus was quite refreshing.
The area was pretty tropical, with tropical trees and flowers.
Because of corona virus, I couldn't get around a whole lot.
Especially, Kyunsang college especially was blossoming with cherry flowers and different plants.
I ate a lot of fresh local seafoods.
I hope to live in such an area (near the ocean), when I retire or get married.
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It sounds like a fun trip. Great work! :)
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I traveled to 'Jin' a Southern district in South Korea, to visit my aunt's. I traveled to |
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My aunt and I are quite close, and I was excited to visit her in a while. My aunt and I are quite close, and I was excited to visit her because I haven't seen her in a while. |
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It was a visit in like ten years. It was |
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It is a long drive from Seoul, even by the express bus. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I packed my stuff the day before, and headed to 'Jin' on Friday afternoon. I packed my stuff the day before, and headed to |
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I was a bit carsick, but traveling in the express bus was quite refreshing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The area was pretty tropical, with tropical trees and flowers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because of corona virus, I couldn't get around a whole lot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But, it was still nice because I got to visit a temple in a mountain and Kyungsang college. |
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Especially, Kyunsang college was blossoming with cherry flowers and different plants.
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I ate a lot of fresh local seafoods. I ate a lot of fresh local seafood |
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I hope to live in such area (near the ocean), when I retire or get married. I hope to live in such an area (near the ocean) |
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