April 6, 2021
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Some reasons why table tennis is my favorite sport.
I haven't had a strong body since I was young, so when I played basketball, I couldn't stand the fierce confrontation. When I play table tennis, I don't need to confront the other side with my body. You only need to stand on your side to play, don't need to have physical contact with each other. So I think this sport is very civilized and it can represent people's intelligence and wisdom. Therefore, I like it.
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SThese are some reasons why table tennis is my favorite sport.
The original sentence sounds a bit fragmented, like you were going to start a list of reasons why, as opposed to a paragraph like you have done, so I added "These are" to make it a complete sentence.
I haven't had a strong body since I was young, so when I played basketball, I couldn't stand the fierce confrontation.
When I play table tennis, I don't need to confront the other side with my body.
You only need to stand on your side to play, and you don't need to have physical contact with each other.
I'm guessing that this is Chinese syntax, but in English, we tend to use "and" to connect clauses as well as nouns (like 和 does), and we tend to not drop the pronoun even if we have already used it before in the same sentence.
So I think this sport is very civilized and it can represent people's intelligence and wisdom.
Therefore, I like it.
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Another strong essay, well done.
April 11, 2021
Thank you very much. You are very helpful.
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Some reasons why table tennis is my favorite sport.
The original sentence sounds a bit fragmented, like you were going to start a list of reasons why, as opposed to a paragraph like you have done, so I added "These are" to make it a complete sentence. |
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I haven't had a strong body since I was young, so when I played basketball, I couldn't stand the fierce confrontation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I play table tennis, I don't need to confront the other side with my body. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You only need to stand on your side to play, don't need to have physical contact with each other. You only need to stand on your side to play, and you don't need to have physical contact with each other. I'm guessing that this is Chinese syntax, but in English, we tend to use "and" to connect clauses as well as nouns (like 和 does), and we tend to not drop the pronoun even if we have already used it before in the same sentence. |
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So I think this sport is very civilized and it can represent people's intelligence and wisdom. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, I like it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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