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Jack

April 4, 2021

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It's sunny and warmer today. I pushed my mom in a wheelchair and went to a small park near our residential building to bask. There is a pingpong table here, and some people were playing ping pong. Which is my favorite sport, but I rarely play it in recent years for many reasons. I started to play ping pong when I was in middle school. There was a cement ping pong table in front of our classroom. We played ping pong on it as long as we had time. But nowadays, because I have to work, I almost don't have time to play it. Even on the weekends, I also don't play it because I just want to stay at home to have a rest.

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It's sunny and warmer today.

I pushed my mom in a wheelchair and went to a small park near our residential building to bask in the sun.

There is a ping pong table here, and some people were playing ping pong.

Wwhich is my favorite sport, but I rarely play it in recent years for many reasons.

You do not need to start another sentence because with the word which you are continuing the previous sentence

I started to play ping pong when I was in middle school.

There was a cement ping pong table in front of our classroom.

We played ping pong on it as long as we had time.

But nowadays, because I have to work, I almost don't have time to play it.

Even on the weekends, I also don't play it because I just want to stay at home to have aand rest.

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Jack

April 7, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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It's sunny and warmer today.


It's sunny and warmer today.

I pushed my mom in a wheelchair and went to a small park near our residential building to bask.


I pushed my mom in a wheelchair and went to a small park near our residential building to bask in the sun.

There is a pingpong table here, and some people were playing ping pong.


There is a ping pong table here, and some people were playing ping pong.

Which is my favorite sport, but I rarely play it in recent years for many reasons.


Wwhich is my favorite sport, but I rarely play it in recent years for many reasons.

You do not need to start another sentence because with the word which you are continuing the previous sentence

I started to play ping pong when I was in middle school.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There was a cement ping pong table in front of our classroom.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We played ping pong on it as long as we had time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But nowadays, because I have to work, I almost don't have time to play it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Even on the weekends, I also don't play it because I just want to stay at home to have a rest.


Even on the weekends, I also don't play it because I just want to stay at home to have aand rest.

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