May 21, 2021
Writing: Job selection
Many people tend to choose permanent jobs because they hate the risk, while some will prefer to take high risks for the sake of interest to get satisfying jobs. I choose the latter.
1. Getting a satisfying job means satisfying one's psychological needs; while a permanent job means a long-term stable income. For me, mental abundance is more important than material abundance.
2. A permanent job often means stability, sameness, and even tedium.
Writing: Job selection
Many people tend to choose permanent jobs because they hate theare wary of risk, while someothers will prefer to take high risks for the sake of getting more interest to geting and satisfying jobs.
There's nothing wrong with what you wrote. I just reworded it to sound more natural.
I choose the latter.
1. Getting a satisfying job means satisfying one's psychological needs; while a permanent job means a long-term stable income.
For me, mental abundancestimulation is more important than material abundance.
"Mental abundance" is an awkward term. I see what you were going for though.
2. A permanent job often means stability, sameness, and even tedium.
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Spelling and grammar were 100% fine. I just provided a couple alternative ways of phrasing things.
May 22, 2021
Thanks :)
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Job security |
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Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others think it is important to find a permanent job. |
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Discuss both views and give your own opinion. |
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Writing: Job selection This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many people tend to choose permanent jobs because they hate the risk, while some will prefer to take high risks for the sake of interest to get satisfying jobs. Many people tend to choose permanent jobs because they There's nothing wrong with what you wrote. I just reworded it to sound more natural. |
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I choose the latter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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1. Getting a satisfying job means satisfying one's psychological needs; while a permanent job means a long-term stable income. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For me, mental abundance is more important than material abundance. For me, mental "Mental abundance" is an awkward term. I see what you were going for though. |
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2. A permanent job often means stability, sameness, and even tedium. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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