Japan - Folklore

doesn't really matter but still

My favorite part of mythe trip was a little bit unusual.

avoid repetition. doesn't really matter tho

It was our visit at Tthe Tono Museum, in the Nnorth of Japan.

This museum is the first japanese museummuseum in Japan dedicated to the folklore, that was opened in 1980.

I love learning about the tales of different countries.

First of all, let's talk about Tono.

"Firstly" might be better here, less aggressive

It was a little town, really pretty, with old and traditional jJapanese houses, in the middle of nowhere.

Tono is the town of Kappa, —a strange creature whothat looks like a turtle, not reall and is not very friendly, becaussince they eat little children if they approach rivers.

commas (,) are okay if there are no commas following. since there are other commas, put a dash (—)
"because" is cause and effect. since the second clause "they eat little children" is constant, use "since"

ButHowever, they also help pregnant women.

"but" makes the clause incomplet

We met a group of children, around eight of them, who were playing, and w. When they saw us, they all said, "Hello!" with a big smile.

don't run on sentences

Apparently, they were too much too old for Kappa.

ConcerningAs for the museum, we can saw a lot of different myths and legends aboutfrom Japan.

too formal
"about" is ok if they are about the country, but I'm guessing they are just from Japan

Of course, everything was in Japanese, but—so thank you, Google Translate!

commas dont match, so split them with a dash

The museum was not really bigvery large, but we cfould find some interesting and interactives expositionhibits.

expand beyond "big"

I passed a lot of time just opening books and looking at the illustration.

Because, oObviously, I couldn't read jJapanese.

After that, we visited a traditionnal house conserved by the museum.

It was the house of Kunio Yanagita, the foundatoer of folklore ethnology in Japan.

He wrote the Tôno Monogatari in 1910, the most important work about jJapanese folklore.

I had a real interest for this personality, but he sadly had a link withto a political party thatwith which I don't share the ideasideology.

In conclusion, if you willever go into this part of Japan, you need to go thereo the folklore museum!

It was our visit ato The Tono Museum, in the North of Japan.

"Visit" here seems like a verb, so it needs "to" after it so it can connect with the rest of the information.

This museum is the first jJapanese museum dedicated to the folklore, thaand it was opened in 1980.

I love learning about the tales of different countries.

Since it's a habit, something you do often, it should be learnING.
(examples: I learn a language. I learned a language. I'm learning a language. I love learning languages.)

It was a little town really pretty little town, with old and traditional jJapanese houses, in the middle of nowhere.

Saying your previous sentence out loud would be fine and casual. "Really pretty" in your sentence, when spoken, would be like a side comment. In writing, however, it doesn't work.

Tono is the town ofhome of the Kappa, a strange creature who looks like a turtle,. They're not reactually friendly, because they eat little children if they approach rivers.

"Home of the ___" is a common phrase. (It appears in the American national anthem: "For the land of the free and the home of the brave".)

ButHowever, they also help pregnant women.

Starting a sentence with "but" in English writing isn't technically correct, though it's fine in speech.

Strange duality, noright?

Ending a sentence with "no" like this isn't wrong necessarily, but I wouldn't say it's common. People will understand, so you can say it if you like.

I don't know why, but I felt good there, maybe because of the good energy.

We met a group of children, around eight, who were playing, and w. When they saw us, they all said "Hello!" with a big smile.

The sentence is a bit long and uses lots of commas. It would be better to split it into two.

Apparently, they were too much old forto be scared of the Kappa.

Concerning the museum, we can saw a lot of different myths and legends about Japan.

Of course, everything was in Japanese, but tit was fine. Thank you Google Translate!

The museum was not realln't very big, but we cfould find some interesting interactives expositionhibits.

"Expositions" and "exhibits" might mean the same thing technically, but "exposition" sounds very grand and formal. At a museum, there are "exhibits".

I passedspent a lot of time just opening books and looking at the illustrations.

Because, obviously, I couldn't read jJapanese.

Starting a sentence with "because", much like starting a sentence with "but" isn't technically correct when writing in English. You can combine this with the previous sentence.

After that, we visited a traditionnal house conserved by the museum.

It was the house of Kunio Yanagita, the foundatoer of folklore ethnology in Japan.

He wrote the Tôno Monogatari in 1910, the most important work about jJapanese folklore.

I had a real interest for this personality, but he sadly had a link with a political party that I don't share the ideasagree with.

In conclusion, if you will go invisit this part of Japan, you definitely need to go there!