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J'ai les cheveux bruns

Bonjour, je m'appelle Alice. J'ai les yeux verte, mais ces sont bleu quelquefois. à la matin quand je m'habille souvent je porterai une jupe rose, un pull vert, mon chapeau préféré et chaussures brun. Mon style est unique, mais j'adore ça.

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J'ai les cheveux bruns

Bonjour, je m'appelle Alice.

J'ai les yeux vertes, mais ceils sont bleus quelquefois.

"ces" is only a possessive (it always works with nouns), never a personal pronoun. You'd need "ils" or "ceux-ci" here
Masculine plural agreement with "yeux" => vertS, bleuS
You can also say "j'ai les yeux vairons" (multicolored eyes)

à laLe matin, quand je m'habille souvent, je porterai souvent une jupe rose, un pull vert, mon chapeau préféré et des chaussures brunmarrons.

Parts of the day don't need prepositions to be introduced => le matin, l'après-midi, le soir...
Habit = present tense => porte ("porterai" is a future form)
Commas to indicate the breaks made by the voice when naturally reading the sentence
Indefinite quantity of something countable => DES chaussures
"brun" is mostly used for furs, hairs, some plants and edible products ("tabac brun", "bière brune"...) but 99% of concrete objects are "marrons"

Mon style est unique, mais j'adore ça.

"j'adore ça" would mean "I love the fact this style is unique", je L'adore" would rather refer to the style itself, but both would be right

J'ai les cheveux bruns


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Bonjour, je m'appelle Alice.


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J'ai les yeux verte, mais ces sont bleu quelquefois.


J'ai les yeux vertes, mais ceils sont bleus quelquefois.

"ces" is only a possessive (it always works with nouns), never a personal pronoun. You'd need "ils" or "ceux-ci" here Masculine plural agreement with "yeux" => vertS, bleuS You can also say "j'ai les yeux vairons" (multicolored eyes)

à la matin quand je m'habille souvent je porterai une jupe rose, un pull vert, mon chapeau préféré et chaussures brun.


à laLe matin, quand je m'habille souvent, je porterai souvent une jupe rose, un pull vert, mon chapeau préféré et des chaussures brunmarrons.

Parts of the day don't need prepositions to be introduced => le matin, l'après-midi, le soir... Habit = present tense => porte ("porterai" is a future form) Commas to indicate the breaks made by the voice when naturally reading the sentence Indefinite quantity of something countable => DES chaussures "brun" is mostly used for furs, hairs, some plants and edible products ("tabac brun", "bière brune"...) but 99% of concrete objects are "marrons"

Mon style est unique, mais j'adore ça.


Mon style est unique, mais j'adore ça.

"j'adore ça" would mean "I love the fact this style is unique", je L'adore" would rather refer to the style itself, but both would be right

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