It was rRaining hHeavily It was Raining Heavily

A more concise title could be: "Heavy Rain".

Today, it was raining very hardly. Today, it was raining very hard.

Today, it was raining very hardly. Today, it was raining very hard.

"hardly raining" = it was only raining a little bit.

Today, it was raining hardly. Today, it was raining hard.

"Hardly" doesn't mean hard, it means "almost not at all". So "raining hardly" means "almost not raining".

Today, it was raining hardeavily. Today, it was raining heavily.

"Hardly" would mean that it wasn't raining very much.

In my country, the weather is unpredictable and can change so many timesuch. In my country, the weather is unpredictable and can change so much.

In my country, the weather is unpredictable and change so many timesa lot. In my country, the weather is unpredictable and change a lot.

In my country, the weather is unpredictable and changes so many times. In my country, the weather is unpredictable and changes so many times.

the weather is singular, so we use "changes" not "change".

In my country, the weather is unpredictable and change so many timess frequently. In my country, the weather is unpredictable and changes frequently.

A good vocab word, if something happens a lot (like the weather changes a lot), you can use the word "frequent".

I had an English lesson, but bigger gradersupperclassmen have been having important tests, so my English teacher decided we should to go to library. I had an English lesson, but upperclassmen have been having important tests, so my English teacher decided we should to go to library.

I had an English lesson but bigger graderthe older students have been having important tests, so my English teacher decided to go to the library. I had an English lesson but the older students have been having important tests, so my English teacher decided to go to the library.

I had an English lesson but bhiggher -grader students have been having important tests, so my English teacher decided to go to the library. I had an English lesson but higher-grade students have been having important tests, so my English teacher decided to go to the library.

"a" becomes "an" before a vowel sound "grader" means someone who grades or evaluates, and is a rare word. We don't have a verb meaning "belonging to a grade", so we have to put it as an adjective instead. Library requires an article,

I had a English lesson but bhiggher grader levels have been havtaking important tests, so my English teacher decided to go to library. I had a English lesson but higher grade levels have been taking important tests, so my English teacher decided to go to library.

I'm from America, so this might change depending on region, but you would typically talk about grade levels above you as "higher grades". "Taking a test" is the most common way this is said. You could say "I have a test today", but "having" isn't commonly used.

Whikle I was reading, the weather was goetting bad and aroundby the time that I go back homeI was going home, the weather was especially horrible. While I was reading, the weather was getting bad and by the time I was going home, the weather was especially horrible.

Whikle I was reading, the weather was goetting badworse and around the time that I gowent back home, it was especially horrible. While I was reading, the weather was getting worse and around the time that I went back home, it was especially horrible.

Whikle I was reading, the weather was going bad and around the time that I gowent back home was especially horrible. While I was reading, the weather was going bad and around the time that I went back home was especially horrible.

"I go back" is present tense, "I went back" is past tense. Also consider "I returned home" as an alternative way to say it.

Whikle I was reading, the weather was goetting badworse and around the time that I go back home it was especially horrible. While I was reading, the weather was getting worse and around the time that I go back home it was especially horrible.

"Going bad" is typically used when talking about food spoiling. For weather, its common to hear "its getting worse".

I moved towardkept walking to go to the traIin stop, but from first few stepthe moment I stepped outside, my socks got drenched. I kept walking to go to the train stop, but from the moment I stepped outside, my socks got drenched.

I moved toforward to go to the traIin stop but from first few steps, my socks got drenched. I moved forward to go to the train stop but from first few steps, my socks got drenched.

I moved towardwent to go to the traIin stop but from the first few steps, my socks got drenched. I went to go to the train stop but from the first few steps, my socks got drenched.

This sentence makes sense, but "from the first few steps, my socks got drenched" is an unusual way to arrange the verbs and nouns. Not bad, but putting the verb at the end of the sentence is the less common choice.

I moved toward to goWhile I was walking to the traIin stop but from first few step, my socks gotwere drenched after the first few steps. While I was walking to the train stop, my socks were drenched after the first few steps.

"Moving to the train stop" sounds a little unnatural so I changed it to "walking". I also re-ordered the second half of the sentence so it flowed together a little better.

It was raining heavily, so I ran faster to make it to the train on time. It was raining heavily, so I ran faster to make it to the train on time.

It was raining heavily, so I ran faster to make it to theon time. It was raining heavily, so I ran faster to make it on time.

It was raining heavily, so I ran faster to make it to the train on time. It was raining heavily, so I ran faster to make it to the train on time.

"the time" doesn't work as a destination in this sentence.

It was raining heavily, so I ran faster to make it to the train in time. It was raining heavily, so I ran faster to make it to the train in time.

I managed to goet on the train, but my socks's colour went had turned a different colour. I managed to get on the train, but my socks had turned a different colour.

I managed to go on the train but my socks's colour went a different colour. I managed to go on the train but my socks went a different colour.

I managed to goet on the train but my socks's colour went different changed colour. I managed to get on the train but my socks changed colour.

plural nouns ending in s are made possesive by adding the apostrophe on its own. the s's you used is for names, and different style guides disagree about if it should be used at all. So you say "socks' colour", but "charles's socks". Some readers prefer "charles's sock" and don't do s's ever.

I managed to goet on the train, but my socks's colour went were so wet they turned a different colour. I managed to get on the train, but my socks' were so wet they turned a different colour.

For plural words like "socks" you just add the " ' " to the end! No extra "s" needed!

My shoes and socks soaked up a lot of waters. My shoes and socks soaked up a lot of water.

My shoes and socks soaked up a lot of waters. My shoes and socks soaked up a lot of water.

My shoes and socks soaked up waters. My shoes and socks soaked up water.

Water is singular unless except in a very few rare cases.

My shoes and socks soaked up so much waters. My shoes and socks soaked up so much water.

The plural of "water" is "water". I know its weird.

I feltThat was uncomfortable. That was uncomfortable.

After I went back home and showed my mum my socks, she hwas been surprised. After I went back home and showed my mum my socks, she was surprised.

After I went backreturned home and showed my mum my socks, she hwas been surprised. After I returned home and showed my mum my socks, she was surprised.

"back home" has the connotation of an immigrant/ traveller talking about their home country.

After I went back home and showed my mum my socks, she hwas been surprised. After I went back home and showed my mum my socks, she was surprised.

After I wengot back home and showed my mum my socks, she hwas been surprised. After I got back home and showed my mum my socks, she was surprised.

I heard that tomorrow wouldill be a sunny day, but the predictionweather forecast here can change easily. I heard that tomorrow will be a sunny day, but the weather forecast here can change easily.

I heard that tomorrow wouldill be a sunny day, but the predictionforecast here can change easily. I heard that tomorrow will be a sunny day, but the forecast here can change easily.

When talking about a weather prediction, it is called "forecast".

I heard that tomorrow would be a sunny day, but the prediction here can change easily. I heard that tomorrow would be a sunny day, but the prediction here can change easily.

I hope tomorrow will have good weatherhe weather will be better tomorrow. I hope the weather will be better tomorrow.

This way sounds more natural.