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March 25, 2025

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Is There Anything That You Think You Couldn't Live Without?

I'm little embarrassed to say this, but I don't think I could live without video games. It isn't expensive and I can play whenever I want. story is amazing like movie film and fills in a wealth of my heart.

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Is There Anything That You Think You Couldn't Live Without?

I'm little embarrassed to say this, but I don't think I could live without video games.

It isOPTION A: They aren't expensive and I can play them whenever I want.¶
OPTION B (Better): Most of them are
n't expensive and I can playusuallyplay them whenever I want.

LOGIC: Some video games are expensive.

story is amazing likThe stories in many video games are amazing resemble movie films and fills in a wealth ofthey fill my heart.

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TOMO_o

March 26, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Is There Anything That You Think You Couldn't Live Without?

I'm a little embarrassed to say this, but I don't think I could live without video games.

It isThey aren't expensive and I can play whenever I want.

story isThe stories are amazing, like a movie film and fills in a wealth of my heart, and they fill my heart with joy.

I wasn't sure exactly what you meant by "fill with wealth" but "fill my heart with joy" is a common expression in English, so I'm suggesting that.

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TOMO_o

March 26, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Is There Anything That You Think You Couldn't Live Without?

I'm a little embarrassed to say this, but I don't think I could live without video games.

It isThey aren't expensive and I can play whenever I want.

The story is amazing like moviea film, and fills in a wealth of my heart.

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TOMO_o

March 26, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

Is There Anything That You Think You Couldn't Live Without?


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I'm little embarrassed to say this, but I don't think I could live without video games.


I'm a little embarrassed to say this, but I don't think I could live without video games.

I'm a little embarrassed to say this, but I don't think I could live without video games.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It isn't expensive and I can play whenever I want.


It isThey aren't expensive and I can play whenever I want.

It isThey aren't expensive and I can play whenever I want.

It isOPTION A: They aren't expensive and I can play them whenever I want.¶
OPTION B (Better): Most of them are
n't expensive and I can playusuallyplay them whenever I want.

LOGIC: Some video games are expensive.

story is amazing like movie film and fills in a wealth of my heart.


The story is amazing like moviea film, and fills in a wealth of my heart.

story isThe stories are amazing, like a movie film and fills in a wealth of my heart, and they fill my heart with joy.

I wasn't sure exactly what you meant by "fill with wealth" but "fill my heart with joy" is a common expression in English, so I'm suggesting that.

story is amazing likThe stories in many video games are amazing resemble movie films and fills in a wealth ofthey fill my heart.

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