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TOMO_o

May 12, 2025

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Is there anything that you should have done today?

I should have looked up new computer on the internet today. Services of Windows 10 will end at October, so I have to search new one that I can play games with. I'd rather buy expensive one.

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I should have looked up a new computer on the internet today.

Services of Windows 10 will end atin October, so I will have to search for a new one that I can play games withon.

I'd rather buy an expensive one.

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TOMO_o

May 13, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

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Is there anything that you should have done today?

I should have looked up a new computer on the internet today.

We need to add the article "a" before "new computer" because "computer" is a countable noun. The indefinite article "a" is necessary to indicate a single item.

Services ofThe support for Windows 10 will end atin October, so I have to search for a new one that I can play games withon.

"Services of Windows 10" is a bit awkward. The more natural phrasing would be "The support for Windows 10." "At October" should be "in October" because we use "in" with months. "Search new one" needs "for" after "search" since we search for things. Also, the article "a" is needed before "new one." "Play games with" should be "play games on," because we typically say "play games on a computer."

I'd rather buy an expensive one.

We need to add "an" before "expensive one" because "one" refers to a singular, countable noun (computer), and we use the indefinite article "an" in this case. Also, "an" is necessary when the following word begins with a vowel sound, like "expensive."

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Great job on your sentence construction! Just a few minor adjustments with articles and prepositions. Keep it up, and you’re getting there!

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TOMO_o

May 13, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
The explanation of the corrections really helps me understand.
I will continue to improve my English skills step by step.

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Is there anything that you should have done today?

I should have looked upsearched for new computers on the iInternet today.

Services of Windows 10 services will end atin October, so I have to search for a new one that I can play games with.

I'd rather buy an expensive one.

Or you can say "I don't mind buying an expensive one"

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Fantastic!

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TOMO_o

May 13, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Is there anything that you should have done today?


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I should have looked up new computer on the internet today.


I should have looked upsearched for new computers on the iInternet today.

I should have looked up a new computer on the internet today.

We need to add the article "a" before "new computer" because "computer" is a countable noun. The indefinite article "a" is necessary to indicate a single item.

I should have looked up a new computer on the internet today.

Services of Windows 10 will end at October, so I have to search new one that I can play games with.


Services of Windows 10 services will end atin October, so I have to search for a new one that I can play games with.

Services ofThe support for Windows 10 will end atin October, so I have to search for a new one that I can play games withon.

"Services of Windows 10" is a bit awkward. The more natural phrasing would be "The support for Windows 10." "At October" should be "in October" because we use "in" with months. "Search new one" needs "for" after "search" since we search for things. Also, the article "a" is needed before "new one." "Play games with" should be "play games on," because we typically say "play games on a computer."

Services of Windows 10 will end atin October, so I will have to search for a new one that I can play games withon.

I'd rather buy expensive one.


I'd rather buy an expensive one.

Or you can say "I don't mind buying an expensive one"

I'd rather buy an expensive one.

We need to add "an" before "expensive one" because "one" refers to a singular, countable noun (computer), and we use the indefinite article "an" in this case. Also, "an" is necessary when the following word begins with a vowel sound, like "expensive."

I'd rather buy an expensive one.

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