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Is hope the main fuel of our life?
Why do we run so much in our lives for something? What is the driving force? We, the middle-class people, try so hard to get nothing but a bare minimum job. I don't think this job is worthy of the hardship that average middle-class people face. A young boy or girl has to go through several years of intensive learning just to earn around 30-40K, which is barely enough to live in today's world. Where an uneducated person running a small business earns somewhat similar. I think this is very unfair. Education should be encouraged more, and that is only possible when an educated person gets the right value for his/her hardship. Unemployment and a bare minimum salary are making education an overrated thing. Most studious people are neglected the most. Knowledge should be celebrated and used properly to bring benefits to the country. Don't make it so unattractive that people become disgusted with education.
Why do we run so much in our lives for something?
What is actually the driving force behind all this?
Is hope the main fuel of our life?
Why do we run so much in our lives foafter something?
What is the driving force?
We, the middle-class people, try so hard to get nothing butmore than a bare minimum job.
I don't think this job is worthy of the hardship that average middle-class people face.
"worthy of" means "deserving of". It is inappropriate in this sentence.
A young boy or girl has to go through several years of intensive learningeducation just to earn around 30-40K, which is barely enough to live in today's world.
"learning" is okay, but "education" might be better, since that's the subject of your writing.
Whereas an uneducated person running a small business earns somewhatthing similar.
I think this is very unfair.
Education should be encouraged more, and that is only possible when an educated person gets the right valuepayback for his/her hardshipefforts.
Alternatively, instead of "for his/her efforts", you can write "for the hardships he/she had to endure", but in any case, you cannot write "for his/her hardship". Also, instead of writing "his/her", you can write "their", which is genderless and singular.
Unemployment and a bare minimum salary are making education an overrated thing.
"overrated" is okay, but consider "underappreciated".
MThe most studious people are neglected the most.
Knowledge should be celebrated and used properly to bring benefits to the country.
Don't make it so unattractive that people become disgustunconcerned with education.
"disgusted" comes off as quite strong and suggests a critical attitude. If you're trying to say that there is no longer incentive for people to get educated, you may consider "unconcerned" instead.
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The grammar is quite on point, so great job. My comments mostly deal with word choice.
Is hope the main fuel of our life?
Why do we run after something for so much inof our lives for something?
The expression is to "run after something"
What is the driving force?
We, the middle-class people, try so hard to get nothing but more than a bare minimum job.
I don't think this job is worthy of the hardships that average middle-class people face.
A young boy or girl has to go through several years of intensive learning just to earn around 30-40K, which is barely enough to live in today's world.
Where aAn uneducated person running a small business earns somewhat similar.
I think this is very unfair.
Education should be encouraged more, and that is only possible when an educated person gets the right valuepayback for his/her hardships.
Unemployment and a bare minimum salary are making education an overrated thing.
MThe most studious people are neglected the most.
Knowledge should be celebrated and used properly to bring benefits to the country.
Don't make it so unattractive that people become disgusted with education.
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Very interesting topic and very well written. I only made a few minor corrections.
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Is hope the main fuel of our life? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why do we run so much in our lives for something? Why do we run after something for so much The expression is to "run after something" Why do we run so much in our lives Why do we run so much in our lives for something? |
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What is the driving force? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! What is actually the driving force behind all this? |
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We, the middle-class people, try so hard to get nothing but a bare minimum job. We, the middle-class people, try so hard to get no We, the middle-class people, try so hard to get nothing |
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I don't think this job is worthy of the hardship that average middle-class people face. I don't think this job is worthy of the hardships that average middle-class people face. I don't think this job is worth "worthy of" means "deserving of". It is inappropriate in this sentence. |
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A young boy or girl has to go through several years of intensive learning just to earn around 30-40K, which is barely enough to live in today's world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! A young boy or girl has to go through several years of intensive "learning" is okay, but "education" might be better, since that's the subject of your writing. |
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Where an uneducated person running a small business earns somewhat similar.
Whereas an uneducated person running a small business earns some |
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I think this is very unfair. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Education should be encouraged more, and that is only possible when an educated person gets the right value for his/her hardship. Education should be encouraged more, and that is only possible when an educated person gets the right Education should be encouraged more, and that is only possible when an educated person gets the right Alternatively, instead of "for his/her efforts", you can write "for the hardships he/she had to endure", but in any case, you cannot write "for his/her hardship". Also, instead of writing "his/her", you can write "their", which is genderless and singular. |
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Unemployment and a bare minimum salary are making education an overrated thing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Unemployment and a bare minimum salary are making education an overrated thing. "overrated" is okay, but consider "underappreciated". |
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Most studious people are neglected the most.
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Knowledge should be celebrated and used properly to bring benefits to the country. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Don't make it so unattractive that people become disgusted with education. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Don't make it so unattractive that people become "disgusted" comes off as quite strong and suggests a critical attitude. If you're trying to say that there is no longer incentive for people to get educated, you may consider "unconcerned" instead. |
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