June 23, 2021
IPhone
I think, the iPhone is one of the great products in the 2010s.
Before introducing the iPhone, most smart phones had many buttons and a small screen.
After Jobs' incredible presentation about the iPhone, it really took off.
The phone has a big screen and users can possible to touch on the screen.
This experience was really new to people, so many people wanted to buy it.
What's more, it had a good appearance.
Having an iPhone meant cool.
Apple is continuing to expand the user experience to other devices like tablets and MP3s.
Now people still want to know what is a next innovate device made by Apple.
I think, the iPhone is one of the great products inof the 2010s.
Before the introducingtion of the iPhone, most smart phones had many buttons and a small screen.
After Jobs' incredible presentation about the iPhone, it really took off.
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This experience was really newovel to people, so many people wanted to buy it.
"new" is ok, but novel is a better word choice.
What's more, it had a good appearance.
Having an iPhone meant you were cool.
Apple is continuing to expand the user experience to other devices like tablets and MP3 players.
MP3s is a file type. MP3 players play the MP3 files.
Now people still want to know what is athe next innovative device made by ApplApple will make.
June 24, 2021
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I think, the iPhone is one of the great products in the 2010s. I think |
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Before introducing the iPhone, most smart phones had many buttons and a small screen. Before the introduc |
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After Jobs' incredible presentation about the iPhone, it really took off. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The phone has a big screen and users can possible to touch on the screen. The phone ha |
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This experience was really new to people, so many people wanted to buy it. This experience was really n "new" is ok, but novel is a better word choice. |
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What's more, it had a good appearance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Having an iPhone meant cool. Having an iPhone meant you were cool. |
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Apple is continuing to expand the user experience to other devices like tablets and MP3s. Apple is continuing to expand the user experience to other devices like tablets and MP3 players. MP3s is a file type. MP3 players play the MP3 files. |
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Now people still want to know what is a next innovate device made by Apple. Now people still want to know what is |
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