好像现在的孩子很想更愿意在ipPad上或手机上玩。

Your original sentence is not wrong. But I think you are trying to compare "children who play on iPads" with "children who go to the park", so "更愿意 (prefer)" is a better word.

虽然我认为在公园去里独自探索，或和其他孩子一起玩，会更好又更有趣，但是我不怪现在的孩子，因为。如果我是只有十岁，可能我也会打扰我请求爸妈为我买ipPad。

Since you used '或(or)' and you followed it with '和其他孩子一起玩 (play with others)', I added '独自 (alone)' to better reflect the difference.
"请求/恳求（beg for）" feels more appropriate than "打扰 (disturb)".

而我可能 / 保不定 也会觉得用iPad玩比去公园更有趣。

or 而我说不定也会觉得用iPad玩比去公园更有趣。