Nov. 15, 2025
Introduction
Hello, my name is Felipe, I am from Brazil, I discovered this site searching for a way to improve my English, and because I need this for a school assignment, I probably need this site in the next year, because I will try to get work in an international company.
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Try to break the paragraph into sentences. You can often replace your commas with full stops (Americans call them periods.)
Try to match the tense. ‘I discovered’ was in the past tense, but in the same sentence you switched to present with ‘I need’.
Feedback
I have replaced the second ‘because’ with ‘as’. This is a stylistic choice to avoid repeating the same word in a paragraph, which gets monotonous.
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Hello, my name is Felipe, I am from Brazil, I discovered this site searching for a way to improve my English, and because I need this for a school assignment, I probably need this site in the next year, because I will try to get work in an international company. Hello, Hello, my name is Felipe Hello, my name is Felipe Try to break the paragraph into sentences. You can often replace your commas with full stops (Americans call them periods.) Try to match the tense. ‘I discovered’ was in the past tense, but in the same sentence you switched to present with ‘I need’. |
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