April 21, 2021
I have already written three diaries here, but I noticed I haven't introduced myself, so let me do, a little later though. My name is Hitomi and I'm 23 years old. I was born and live in Osaka, Japan. I just graduated from college last month and I majored in economics. I belonged to a Chinese economic seminar and half of the member were Chinese. Now, I'm job hunting and I'm interested in the financial industry and real estate world. For the time being, I'm gonna work for a company and acquire expertise at least for three years, and after that, I want to go to Australia on a working holiday. So I started to learn English in earnest and by the time I will go, I want to speak English more fluently. My hobbies are reading books, cooking, listening to music, going to concerts ( unfortunately, I can't it right now in this situation.), drinking with my friends. And what I want to do the best after this situation is TRAVELING. I have never been to Hawaii so definitely I will go. Thank you for reading.
introduce myself
I have already written three diary entries here, but I noticed I haven't introduced myself, so let me do, a little later thoughhere I go.
Very US alternative.
Here are more:
I've already written three diary entries here, but I just noticed that I haven't introduced myself so please let me do so now.
I've already written three diary entries here, but I just noticed that I haven't introduced myself so please allow me to do so now.
My name is Hitomi and I'm 23 years old.
I was born and live in Osaka, Japan.
I just graduated from college last month and I majored in economics.
I belonged to a Chinese economic seminar and half of the members were Chinese.
We need to use the plural form of "member" here.
Now, I'm job hunting and I'm interested in the financial industry and real estate world.
For the time being, I'm gonnaing to work for a company and acquire expertise for at least for three years, and, after that, I want to go to Australia on a working holiday.
As the previous person said, "gonna" is very colloquial. We don't really use it in writing unless we're making up a story.
So I started to learn English in earnest and, by the time I will go, I want to speak English more fluently.
"by the time I go" is a subjunctive phrase so "will" isn't used. 楽しそうです。頑張ってください!
My hobbies are reading books, cooking, listening to music, going to concerts ( unfortunately, I can't it right now in this situation. ), drinking with my friends.
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My hobbies are reading books, cooking, listening to music, going to concerts (unfortunately, I can't go right now in this situation), drinking with my friends.
And what I want to do the bemost after this situation is TRAVELING.
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And what I want to do the most after this situation is *travel.*
All capitalization (all caps) can be considered rude when writing so we try to use italics (斜体) instead. If we can't use italics, we use asterisks (*) or underscores (_).
はい、私も旅行したいです!
I have never been to Hawaii so I'll definitely I will gogo there.
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I've never been to Hawaii so I'll definitely go there first.
Thank you for reading.
Feedback
いいね。よくできました。^^
introduce myself
I have already written three diaries here, but I noticed I haven't introduced myself, so l. Let me do, a little later though so even though it's late.
"so let me do, a little later though."
"A little later though"
I am assuming you want to say 少し遅いけど、やて見て you want to say this then "even though it's late" is more fitting.
"So let me do" → it feels awkward to use this here, either you'll go with
1) "Let me do so" やて見て
2) "Let me try" 試して
"So" → usually you would use it in the middle of sentence/casual
My name is Hitomi and I'm 23 years old.
I was born and live in Osaka, Japan.
I just graduated from college last month and I majored in economics.
I belonged to a Chinese economic seminar and half of the member were Chinese.
Now, I'm job hunting and I'm interested in the financial industry and real estate world.
For the time being, I'm gonnaing to work for a company and acquire expertise at least for three years, and after that, I want to go to Australia onfor a working holiday.
gonna → we only use it when we speak/casual texting; formal/writing should be "going to"
Going to vs Will
Will → usually is still a plan
Going to → Plan has been created & is in progress
So I started toHence, I am learning English in earnest andly so by the time I will go, I want toill speak English more fluently.
Other words than "So" → only for beginning sentence
- Hence
- Therefore
- That's why (Casual)
"I started to learn English in earnest and by the time I will go"
本気に英語を勉強して初めています → you are still learning english right now it's considered as present continuous
My hobbies are reading books, cooking, listening to music, going to concerts ( unfortunately, I can't it right now in this situation. ), drinking with my friends.
And what I want to do the best after this situation is TRAVELINGtraveling.
I have never been to Hawaii so I will definitely I will gogo there one day.
Thank you for reading.
Feedback
Hello!! I think try to avoid using "so" too often and branch out to other words so it feels more natural especially in writing. But you're doing great! Good luck!
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I have already written three diaries here, but I noticed I haven't introduced myself, so let me do, a little later though. I have already written three diaries here, but I noticed I haven't introduced myself "so let me do, a little later though." "A little later though" I am assuming you want to say 少し遅いけど、やて見て you want to say this then "even though it's late" is more fitting. "So let me do" → it feels awkward to use this here, either you'll go with 1) "Let me do so" やて見て 2) "Let me try" 試して "So" → usually you would use it in the middle of sentence/casual I have already written three diary entries here, but I noticed I haven't introduced myself Very US alternative. Here are more: I've already written three diary entries here, but I just noticed that I haven't introduced myself so please let me do so now. I've already written three diary entries here, but I just noticed that I haven't introduced myself so please allow me to do so now. |
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For the time being, I'm gonna work for a company and acquire expertise at least for three years, and after that, I want to go to Australia on a working holiday. For the time being, I'm go gonna → we only use it when we speak/casual texting; formal/writing should be "going to" Going to vs Will Will → usually is still a plan Going to → Plan has been created & is in progress For the time being, I'm go As the previous person said, "gonna" is very colloquial. We don't really use it in writing unless we're making up a story. |
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So I started to learn English in earnest and by the time I will go, I want to speak English more fluently.
Other words than "So" → only for beginning sentence - Hence - Therefore - That's why (Casual) "I started to learn English in earnest and by the time I will go" 本気に英語を勉強して初めています → you are still learning english right now it's considered as present continuous So I started to learn English in earnest and, by the time I "by the time I go" is a subjunctive phrase so "will" isn't used. 楽しそうです。頑張ってください! |
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My hobbies are reading books, cooking, listening to music, going to concerts ( unfortunately, I can't it right now in this situation. ), drinking with my friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My hobbies are reading books, cooking, listening to music, going to concerts ( or My hobbies are reading books, cooking, listening to music, going to concerts (unfortunately, I can't go right now in this situation), drinking with my friends. |
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And what I want to do the best after this situation is TRAVELING. And what I want to do the best after this situation is And what I want to do the or And what I want to do the most after this situation is *travel.* All capitalization (all caps) can be considered rude when writing so we try to use italics (斜体) instead. If we can't use italics, we use asterisks (*) or underscores (_). はい、私も旅行したいです! |
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I have never been to Hawaii so definitely I will go. I have never been to Hawaii so I will definitely I have never been to Hawaii so I'll definitely US alternative or I've never been to Hawaii so I'll definitely go there first. |
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