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SummerTeaWater

April 18, 2021

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Introduce My Job

I have worked as a Software Programmer especially Broadcast Middleware of TV products for the Visual display division.

Because the trend of TV Software has changed from Digital TV to Service-oriented TV since 10 years, there is no more spotlight on my Software module now.

Whether or not, my software module is one of the key software that TV must use my team's software for showing TV channels, change HDMI sources and setting timer of a TV.

Recently, my company has been trying to develop Software Architectures.

Fortunately my module is the best one for training the course, so I am preparing it more easier than others.

I already have an Assistance Software Architecture license and I am participating in the working group of Architectures.

My goal is to earn the Software Architecture license within two years.
By the license, I want to become a principle software engineer.

I will do my best to get it.

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Introduceing My Job

I have worked as a Software Programmer especiallyat Broadcast Middleware of TV products for the Vvisual display division.

If you want to use the perfect, it's usually "I have worked FOR [number of years]."

Because the trend of TV Ssoftware has changed from Ddigital TV to Sservice-oriented TV sinceover the last 10 years, there is no mless need fore spotlight on my Software modules now.

Whether or notNevertheless, my software module is one of the key software that TV must use my team's software for showing TV channels, change HDMI sources and setting timer of a TV.

Always "whether or not" + clause
https://www.englishpedia.net/my-grammar/advanced/if-clauses/whether-or-not-conditionals.html

Recently, my company has been trying to develop Ssoftware Aarchitectures.

Fortunately, my module is the best one for training the course, so I am preparing it morehaving a much easier time than others.

I already have an Assistance Software Architecture license and I am participating in the architecture working group of Architectures.

"Architecture" is almost never in the plural

My goal is to earn the Software Architecture license within two years.

By the license, I want to become a principle software engineer.

Not sure what you mean here by the first part...

I will do my best to get it.

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SummerTeaWater

April 20, 2021

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By the license, I want to become a principle software engineer.

It is very hard to get a principle engineer. To archive it, I will try to get the license because it has plus score when getting the degree.

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SummerTeaWater

April 20, 2021

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Whether or notNevertheless, my software module is one of the key software that TV must use my team's software for showing TV channels, change HDMI sources and setting timer of a TV.

Thanks for introducing this site. I will use it. :)

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Aviva

April 23, 2021

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It is very hard to get a principle engineer. To archive it, I will try to get the license because it has plus score when getting the degree.

Ah, okay. I would say, "This license will make it easier for me to become a principle engineer" or "This license will increase my chances of being hired as a principle engineer."

Introduce My Job


Introduceing My Job

I am currently working as a Software Programmer especially Broadcast Middleware of TV products.


Because the trend of TV Software has changed from Digital TV to Service-oriented TV since 10 years, there is no more spotlight on my Software area now.


Whether or not, my software module is one of key software that TV must use my team's code for showing TV channel, change HDMI sources and setting timer of a TV.


Recently, my company has been trying to develop Software Architecture and my module is the best one for training the course.


I already have an Assistance Software Architecture license and I am participating in the working group of Architectures.


I already have an Assistance Software Architecture license and I am participating in the architecture working group of Architectures.

"Architecture" is almost never in the plural

My goal is to earn the Software Architecture license within two years.


My goal is to earn the Software Architecture license within two years.

I will do my best to get it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have worked as a Software Programmer especially Broadcast Middleware of TV products for the Visual display division.


I have worked as a Software Programmer especiallyat Broadcast Middleware of TV products for the Vvisual display division.

If you want to use the perfect, it's usually "I have worked FOR [number of years]."

Whether or not, my software module is one of key software that TV must use my team's software for showing TV channel, change HDMI sources and setting timer of a TV.


Recently, my company has been trying to develop Software Architecture.


Fortunately my module is the best one for training the course, so I am preparing it more easier than others.


Fortunately, my module is the best one for training the course, so I am preparing it morehaving a much easier time than others.

By the license, I want to become a senior software engineer.


Recently, my company has been trying to develop Software Architectures.


Recently, my company has been trying to develop Ssoftware Aarchitectures.

By the license, I want to become a principle software engineer.


By the license, I want to become a principle software engineer.

Not sure what you mean here by the first part...

Because the trend of TV Software has changed from Digital TV to Service-oriented TV since 10 years, there is no more spotlight on my Software module now.


Because the trend of TV Ssoftware has changed from Ddigital TV to Sservice-oriented TV sinceover the last 10 years, there is no mless need fore spotlight on my Software modules now.

Whether or not, my software module is one of the key software that TV must use my team's software for showing TV channels, change HDMI sources and setting timer of a TV.


Whether or notNevertheless, my software module is one of the key software that TV must use my team's software for showing TV channels, change HDMI sources and setting timer of a TV.

Always "whether or not" + clause https://www.englishpedia.net/my-grammar/advanced/if-clauses/whether-or-not-conditionals.html

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