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SummerTeaWater

March 27, 2021

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Introduce my job

A coworker who is likeminded gave up a job.

There is only one way to communicate with him on the Linkedin site.

After reading his profile, I recognized that I haven't written my profile in English.

At this time, I try to write my current job.

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I have worked as the Software programmer for Visual display division for the last 11 years.

After graduating from the Korea University, I earned the assistant SW architecture license.

To stay current, I have been trying to learn code reviewing and plan to create two SW projects this year.

And I am proficient in broadcast country specs worldwide.

I would love to archive a SW architecture license and want to become a senior engineer.

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Introduce my job

A coworker who is likeminded and gave up a job.

There is only one way to communicate with him, on the Linkedin site.

After reading his profile, I recognizalised that I haven't written my profile in English.

At this time, I tryam trying to write my current job.

I have worked as thea Software programmer for the Visual display division for the last 11 years.

After graduating from the Korea University, I earned thean assistant SW architecture license.

To stay currentin the modern times, I have been trying to learn code reviewing, and I plan to create two SW projects this year.

And I am proficient in broadcast country specs worldwide.

I would love to archive a SW architecture license, and I want to become a senior engineer.

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SummerTeaWater

March 31, 2021

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Thanks for your feedback.

Introduce myself


I have worked as the Software programmer for Visual display division for the last 11 years.


I have worked as thea Software programmer for the Visual display division for the last 11 years.

After graduating from the Korea University, I earned the assistant SW architecture license.


After graduating from the Korea University, I earned thean assistant SW architecture license.

To stay current, I have been trying to learn code reviewing and plan to create two SW projects.


And I am proficient in broadcast country specs all of the world.


I would love to archive a SW architecture license and want to become a SW architecture.


A coworker who is likeminded gave up a job.


A coworker who is likeminded and gave up a job.

There is only one way to communicate with him on the Linkedin site.


There is only one way to communicate with him, on the Linkedin site.

After reading his profile, I recognized that I haven't written my profile in English.


After reading his profile, I recognizalised that I haven't written my profile in English.

At this time, I try to write my current job.


At this time, I tryam trying to write my current job.

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Introduce my job


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To stay current, I have been trying to learn code reviewing and plan to create two SW projects this year.


To stay currentin the modern times, I have been trying to learn code reviewing, and I plan to create two SW projects this year.

And I am proficient in broadcast country specs worldwide.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would love to archive a SW architecture license and want to become a senior engineer.


I would love to archive a SW architecture license, and I want to become a senior engineer.

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