April 18, 2025
Indie is Making a Horse Out of Beeswax
In the Bluey episode "Cotton," the classmates are making animals out of beeswax.
Indie wants to make a horse, but her classmates think it looks like a cow. She starts to feel like she’s not good at anything. Her mate, Winton, gives her a hand, and together they try to make the horse look just right. They found the neck is too short compared to the true one. So they stretch the neck a bit, and now the classmates say it’s a giraffe! Too long! Eventually, they adjust the neck again, and finally, it looks like a horse!
During the process, Indie feels like giving up. She says, “I can’t make a horse… but it’s a good cow.” That moment made me think: if we always change our ideas just to fit what others think, are we really being true to ourselves?
In the Bluey episode "Cotton," the classmates are making animals out of beeswax.
Indie wants to make a horse, but her classmates think it looks like a cow.
She starts to feel like she’s not good at anything.
Her matefriend, Winton, gives her a hand, and together they try to make the horse look just right.
They found the neck is too short compared to the true ona real horse.
Another way to put it.
So they stretch the neck a bit, and now the classmates say it’s looks like a giraffe!
Too long!
Eventually, they adjust the neck again, and finally, it looks like a horse!
During the process, Indie feels likewanted to givinge up.
This sounds better to me.
She saysid, “I can’t make a horse… but it’s a good cow.” That moment made me think: if we always change our ideas just to fit what others think, are we really being true to ourselves?
Hmmm 🤔
Indie wants to make a horse, but her classmates think it looks like a cow.
She starts to feel like she’s not good at anything.
Her matefriend, Winton, gives her a hand, and together they tryied to make the horse look just right.
Mate is more common in British, Australian English, but Friend is commonly used in America
They found the neck is too short compared to the true one.
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Indie is MakingMakes a Horse Out of Beeswax
In the Bluey episode "Cotton," the classmates are makingmake animals out of beeswax.
Present tense in essays, present continuous reads strange.
Indie wanttries / intends to make a horse, but her classmates think it looks like a cow.
Your sentence is correct but "tries" or "intends" is clearer.
Her matefriend, Winton, gives her a hand, and together they try to make the horse look just right.
"Mate" is used more conversationally. 100% correct though.
They found the neck is too short compared to the true onan actual horse.
"The true one" is very good, but it's rather poetic. "A true horse" could work too but "an actual horse" is best.
So they stretch the neck a bit, and now the classmates say it’s's giraffe looking / it resembles a giraffe / it looks like a giraffe!
She says, “I can’t make a horse… but it’s a good cow.” That moment made me think: if we always change our ideas just to fit what others think, are we really being true to ourselves?
Perfect!
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April 20, 2025
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In the Bluey episode "Cotton," the classmates are making animals out of beeswax. In the Bluey episode "Cotton," the classmates Present tense in essays, present continuous reads strange. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Indie wants to make a horse, but her classmates think it looks like a cow. Indie Your sentence is correct but "tries" or "intends" is clearer. Indie wants to make a horse, but her classmates think it looks like a cow. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She starts to feel like she’s not good at anything. She starts to feel like she’s not good at anything. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Her mate, Winton, gives her a hand, and together they try to make the horse look just right. Her "Mate" is used more conversationally. 100% correct though. Her Mate is more common in British, Australian English, but Friend is commonly used in America Her |
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They found the neck is too short compared to the true one. They found the neck is too short compared to "The true one" is very good, but it's rather poetic. "A true horse" could work too but "an actual horse" is best. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They found the neck is too short compared to Another way to put it. |
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So they stretch the neck a bit, and now the classmates say it’s a giraffe! So they stretch the neck a bit, and now the classmates say it So they stretch the neck a bit, and now the classmates say it |
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Eventually, they adjust the neck again, and finally, it looks like a horse! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During the process, Indie feels like giving up. During the process, Indie This sounds better to me. |
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She says, “I can’t make a horse… but it’s a good cow.” That moment made me think: if we always change our ideas just to fit what others think, are we really being true to ourselves? She says, “I can’t make a horse… but it’s a good cow.” That moment made me think: if we always change our ideas just to fit what others think, are we really being true to ourselves? Perfect! She sa Hmmm 🤔 |
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