June 2, 2021
Inconvenient without WI-FI
When I was back from work, I realized that my WI-FI does not work. Free internet at home is like air, so I forget its convenient.
At first, it is very hard to write this journal on my phone. Every time I used a spell checker to verify my journal but I can not do it for this journal.
Watching Youtube videos are tough, too. I have to watch them on a small screen with low picture quality.
The last thing is that my iPad cannot upload data on cloud.
This is why I want to use cellular model of iPad.
I am waiting an engineer who can fix this problem.
I hope he will come and fix it soon.
When I wasreturned from work, I realized that my Wi-Fi was not working.¶
When I came back from work, I realized that my WIi-FI does noi wasn't working.
Free internet at home is like air, so I forget itshow convenient it is.
At first, it is very hard to write this journal on my phone.
Every time I used a spell checker to verify my journal but I can not do it for this journal.
Watching Youtube videos areis tough, too.
In this sentence, our subject is "watching," so we should use the singular form of the verb.
More examples--> Waking up early is difficult. Teaching my students is interesting. Memorizing Korean verbs is a challenge.
The last thing is that my iPad cannot upload data onto the cloud.
This is why I want to use the cellular model of iPad. This is why I want to use a cellular model of iPad.
I am waiting for/on an engineer who can fix this problem.
I hope he will comes and fix it soon.
With the verb "hope" we usually use the simple present tense, even though we are referring to the future. Some native speakers will use "will come," but it might depend on how formal they are or where they are from.
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수고했어요! Great work! I hope the problem gets fixed soon :)
June 3, 2021
Thank you very much expecially your corrections. Those are very helpful for me :)
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Inconvenient without WI-FI |
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When I was back from work, I realized that my WI-FI does not work. When I |
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Free internet at home is like air, so I forget its convenient. Free internet at home is like air, so I forget |
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At first, it is very hard to write this journal on my phone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every time I used a spell checker to verify my journal but I can not do it for this journal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Watching Youtube videos are tough, too. Watching Youtube videos In this sentence, our subject is "watching," so we should use the singular form of the verb. More examples--> Waking up early is difficult. Teaching my students is interesting. Memorizing Korean verbs is a challenge. |
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I have to watch them on a small screen with low picture quality. |
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The last thing is that my iPad cannot upload data on cloud. The last thing is that my iPad cannot upload data |
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This is why I want to use cellular model of iPad. This is why I want to use the cellular model of iPad. This is why I want to use a cellular model of iPad. |
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I am waiting an engineer who can fix this problem. I am waiting for/on an engineer who can fix this problem. |
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I hope he will come and fix it soon. I hope he With the verb "hope" we usually use the simple present tense, even though we are referring to the future. Some native speakers will use "will come," but it might depend on how formal they are or where they are from. |
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