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Toratora

April 16, 2025

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I’m tired

Today was not happy day. I wasted much time during working hours.
I tried to extract data from my clients system. But I didn’t know well about the system.
So it took long time to understand how structure is defined.
And finally I couldn’t finish my task. I was so disappointed..

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I’m tired

Today was not a happy day.

I wasted so much time during my working hours day.

I tried to extract data from my client's system.,

Bbut I didn’t know wellenough about the system.it,

Sso it took a long time to understand how it was structure is defined.

And finallyt the end of the day, I couldn’t finish my task.

I was so disappointed..

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Sorry to hear about this. :(
Your English is pretty good though, so that's something to be happy about!

I’m tired

Today was not a happy day.

I wasted so much time during working hours.

I tried to extract data from my clients' system.

But I didn’t know well about the system very well.

So it took a long time to understand how the structure is defined.

And finallyIn the end, I couldn’t finish my task.

I was so disappointed...

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Toratora

April 24, 2025

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Thank you

Today was not a happy day.

I wasted much time during working hours.

I tried to extract data from my client's system.

Need the " 's " to show possession

But I didn’t know well about the system well.

So it took a long time to understand howits structure is defined.

This sentence can also be combined with the 2 previous sentences:

"I tried to extract data from my client's system but I didn't know their system well so it took a long time to understand its structure."

And finally I couldn’t finish my task.

I was so disappointed..

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Great job! Hopefully you have a better day tomorrow !!

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Toratora

April 24, 2025

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Thanks a lot

Today, I was not happy day.

I wasted so much time during my working hours.

But, I didn’t know wellmuch about the system.

So, it took a long time to understand how the is structure is defined.

And finally, I couldn’t finish my task.

I was so disappointed..

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I hope you have a better day tomorrow!

I tried to extract data from my clients system.


I tried to extract data from my client's system.

Need the " 's " to show possession

I tried to extract data from my clients' system.

I tried to extract data from my client's system.,

But I didn’t know well about the system.


But, I didn’t know wellmuch about the system.

But I didn’t know well about the system well.

But I didn’t know well about the system very well.

Bbut I didn’t know wellenough about the system.it,

So it took long time to understand how structure is defined.


So, it took a long time to understand how the is structure is defined.

So it took a long time to understand howits structure is defined.

This sentence can also be combined with the 2 previous sentences: "I tried to extract data from my client's system but I didn't know their system well so it took a long time to understand its structure."

So it took a long time to understand how the structure is defined.

Sso it took a long time to understand how it was structure is defined.

And finally I couldn’t finish my task.


And finally, I couldn’t finish my task.

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And finallyIn the end, I couldn’t finish my task.

And finallyt the end of the day, I couldn’t finish my task.

I was so disappointed..


I was so disappointed..

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I was so disappointed...

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I’m tired


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Today was not happy day.


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Today was not a happy day.

Today was not a happy day.

Today was not a happy day.

I wasted much time during working hours.


I wasted so much time during my working hours.

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I wasted so much time during working hours.

I wasted so much time during my working hours day.

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