June 10, 2025
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Hello, everyone. I`ve just registred on this website to improve my writing skills. English is actually my third language, `cause my native one is kazakh (I`m from Kazakhstan, that`s a country in Central Asia if someone does not know) and my second language is russian `cause we border with Russia. I wanna tell more about my homecountry. Kazakhstan is a very beautiful and wonderful place. Astana is a capital of my country, but I guess the main city is Almaty. There are more attractions for tourists, the biggest population, buildings are more and taller, the city is bigger than the capital as well. My country has a lot of different landscapes from mountains to steppes. If you wanna visit, you have to see all of it.
I wanted to start writing a simple text to see how does it actually work.
I`'m new here.
Hello, everyone.
I`'ve just registered on this website to improve my writing skills.
English is actually my third language, `'cause my native one is kKazakh (I`'m from Kazakhstan, that`'s a country in Central Asia if someone does not know) and my second language is rRussian `'cause we border with Russia.
"Kazakh" is the name of a language, so it's a proper noun and always capitalised. The same applies for "Russian".
I wanna tell you more about my home country.
(1) Generally, "tell" needs to be followed by the listener such as "you". Alternatively: "I wanna talk more about my home country." "Talk" does not require you to specify the listener.
(2) "Homecountry" is not a single word.
Kazakhstan is a very beautiful and wonderful place.
Astana is athe capital of my country, but I guess the main city is Almaty.
You should "the" instead of "a", since every country has only one capital, so it's specific.
There are more attractions for tourists, it has the biggest population, the buildings are more numerous and taller, and the city is bigger than the capital as well.
(1) You need to write "it has". Otherwise, "the biggest population" will borrow the phrase "there are" from the previous part of the sentence to form "there are the biggest population", which is ungrammatical.
(2) I think "the buildings" is more natural than just "building", because you're referring to buildings in Almaty specifically.
(3) "Buildings are more" sounds unnatural, probably because the phrase is ambiguous. Adding a word like "numerous" clarifies that you're referring to the number of buildings.
(4) You will notice that in your sentence, you have to frequently state the subject: "there are", "it has", "the buildings are", "the city is". I would optimise the sentence like this: "The city has more attractions for tourists, the biggest population, buildings which are more numerous and taller, and it is bigger than the capital as well." By making "the city" the common subject in each of the four phrases, the sentence flows much more smoothly.
My country has a lot of different landscapes from mountains to steppes.
If you wanna visit, you have to see all of it.
I wanted to start writing a simple text to see how does it actually works.
"How does it actually work" is a question. "How it actually works" is a statement, and is what you should use here.
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English is actually my third language, `cause my native one is kazakh (I`m from Kazakhstan, that`s a country in Central Asia if someone does not know) and my second language is russian `cause we border with Russia. English is actually my third language, "Kazakh" is the name of a language, so it's a proper noun and always capitalised. The same applies for "Russian". |
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I wanna tell more about my homecountry. I wanna tell you more about my home country. (1) Generally, "tell" needs to be followed by the listener such as "you". Alternatively: "I wanna talk more about my home country." "Talk" does not require you to specify the listener. (2) "Homecountry" is not a single word. |
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Kazakhstan is a very beautiful and wonderful place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Astana is a capital of my country, but I guess the main city is Almaty. Astana is You should "the" instead of "a", since every country has only one capital, so it's specific. |
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There are more attractions for tourists, the biggest population, buildings are more and taller, the city is bigger than the capital as well. There are more attractions for tourists, it has the biggest population, the buildings are more numerous and taller, and the city is bigger than the capital as well. (1) You need to write "it has". Otherwise, "the biggest population" will borrow the phrase "there are" from the previous part of the sentence to form "there are the biggest population", which is ungrammatical. (2) I think "the buildings" is more natural than just "building", because you're referring to buildings in Almaty specifically. (3) "Buildings are more" sounds unnatural, probably because the phrase is ambiguous. Adding a word like "numerous" clarifies that you're referring to the number of buildings. (4) You will notice that in your sentence, you have to frequently state the subject: "there are", "it has", "the buildings are", "the city is". I would optimise the sentence like this: "The city has more attractions for tourists, the biggest population, buildings which are more numerous and taller, and it is bigger than the capital as well." By making "the city" the common subject in each of the four phrases, the sentence flows much more smoothly. |
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My country has a lot of different landscapes from mountains to steppes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you wanna visit, you have to see all of it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wanted to start writing a simple text to see how does it actually work. I wanted to start writing a simple text to see how "How does it actually work" is a question. "How it actually works" is a statement, and is what you should use here. |
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