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Lucho123

Jan. 19, 2025

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I'm a new member in this web site

Hello everybody, I´m Angel PC. In fact, I´m 24 years old. I like to play videogames, flying drones, Learning new things, studying software, Hardware, Engineering, Technology. I wanna meet successful persons etc.

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I'm a new member ion this web site

In fact, I´m 24 years old.

I like to play video games,; flying drones, L; learning new things,; and studying software, Hhardware, Eengineering, Tand technology.

Because "study software, hardware, engineering, and technology" is a list of things you study, but this list is inside a bigger list (things you like to do), the items in the bigger list are separated with semicolons instead of commas.

I wannat to meet successful persons etcople.

"Wanna" is ok but is only used in very informal text (like a message between friends).
"Etc." is only used when there are at least 2 items in the list. Because there is only 1 item here, it should not be used.

I'm a nNew mMember in tThis wWeb site

Hello everybody,. I´'m Angel PC.

In fact, I´'m 24 years old.

Use, "In fact," when you want to emphasize a fact or back up with your opinion with facts.

I like to playing video games, flying drones, Land earning new things,. Additionally, I like studying software, Hhardware, Eengineering, Ttechnology.

Use the same verb tense.

I wanna meet successful personsople, etc.

I'm a new member ion this web site

Hello everybody, I´m Angel PC.

In fact, I´m 24 years old.

"In fact" doesn't make sense here, because there has been no argument otherwise. You could say something else to emphasize your age, but I don't think it's needed.

I like to play videogames, flying drones, Llearning new things, studying software, Hhardware, Eengineering, Ttechnology.

verb tense agreement

I wanna meet successful personsople etc.

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welcome!

I'm a new member in this web site


I'm a new member ion this web site

I'm a nNew mMember in tThis wWeb site

I'm a new member ion this web site

Hello everybody, I´m Angel PC.


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Hello everybody,. I´'m Angel PC.

In fact, I´m 24 years old.


In fact, I´m 24 years old.

"In fact" doesn't make sense here, because there has been no argument otherwise. You could say something else to emphasize your age, but I don't think it's needed.

In fact, I´'m 24 years old.

Use, "In fact," when you want to emphasize a fact or back up with your opinion with facts.

In fact, I´m 24 years old.

I like to play videogames, flying drones, Learning new things, studying software, Hardware, Engineering, Technology.


I like to play videogames, flying drones, Llearning new things, studying software, Hhardware, Eengineering, Ttechnology.

verb tense agreement

I like to playing video games, flying drones, Land earning new things,. Additionally, I like studying software, Hhardware, Eengineering, Ttechnology.

Use the same verb tense.

I like to play video games,; flying drones, L; learning new things,; and studying software, Hhardware, Eengineering, Tand technology.

Because "study software, hardware, engineering, and technology" is a list of things you study, but this list is inside a bigger list (things you like to do), the items in the bigger list are separated with semicolons instead of commas.

I wanna meet successful persons etc.


I wanna meet successful personsople etc.

I wanna meet successful personsople, etc.

I wannat to meet successful persons etcople.

"Wanna" is ok but is only used in very informal text (like a message between friends). "Etc." is only used when there are at least 2 items in the list. Because there is only 1 item here, it should not be used.

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