May 19, 2021
If you had all the money in the world (4)
I want to continue my story about what I would do if I had all the money in the world. My idea was to start a publishing house to publish textbooks. But not a traditional company, but something different. In the last post, I wrote that the first step was to create a platform where teachers could uplaad theirs resources for a little of money.
Nowdays there are many platforms to education (classroom, Moodle, etc), but they are platform designed to work with teachers and students. Now we need a place different. Obviously there are many ways to upload something to the cloud, but the challenge is to have all these resources organiced according the learning standards. The idea is that the teacher could download several specific resources and build their own texbook.
En el último post, escribí que el primer paso era crear una plataforma donde el profesorado podría subir sus recursos a cambio de un poco de dinero.
Hoy día hay muchas plataformas para educación (classroom, Moodle,etc), pero son plataformas pensadas para trabajar profesores y alumnos. Ahora necesitamos un sitio diferente. Obviamente hay muchas maneras de subir algo a la nube, pero el reto es tener todos los recursos organizados de acuerdo a los estándares educativos. La idea es que el profesor pueda descargar varios recursos concretos y construir su propio libro de texto.
But nNot a traditional company, but something different.
In the last post, I wrote that the first step was to create a platform where teachers could uplaoad theirs resources for a little bit of money.
Nowdays there are many platforms tofor education (classroom, Moodle, etc), but they are platforms designed to work with teachers and students.
I think you just made a quick little mistake here, nothing big.
Now we need a place different. place.
Usually, I’ve noticed that describing words come before the focus of the sentence when you’re not using is / are (e. fluffy brown dog, massive school bus, big idea)
If you wanted to use is / are, you could say “Now we need a place that is different”
Obviously there are many ways to upload something to the cloud, but the challenge is to havehaving all these resources organiced according the learning standards.
The idea is that the teacher could download several specific resources and build their own texbook.
Feedback
Excellent writing! There are a few small mistakes but nothing big. Beyond that, I think it’s a cool idea, this was interesting to read.
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If you had all the money in the world (4) |
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I want to continue my story about what I would do if I had all the money in the world. |
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My idea was to start a publishing house to publish textbooks. |
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But not a traditional company, but something different.
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In the last post, I wrote that the first step was to create a platform where teachers could uplaad theirs resources for a little of money. In the last post, I wrote that the first step was to create a platform where teachers could upl |
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Nowdays there are many platforms to education (classroom, Moodle, etc), but they are platform designed to work with teachers and students. Nowdays there are many platforms I think you just made a quick little mistake here, nothing big. |
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Now we need a place different. Now we need a Usually, I’ve noticed that describing words come before the focus of the sentence when you’re not using is / are (e. fluffy brown dog, massive school bus, big idea) If you wanted to use is / are, you could say “Now we need a place that is different” |
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Obviously there are many ways to upload something to the cloud, but the challenge is to have all these resources organiced according the learning standards. Obviously there are many ways to upload something to the cloud, but the challenge is |
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The idea is that the teacher could download several specific resources and build their own texbook. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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