Oct. 15, 2025
IELTS C1, Part 1: Globalization
Barely any other topic receives as much attention as globalization does. While some assert that it detrimentally influences minority cultures and languages, I firmly contend that globalization not only fosters economic growth worldwide, but also creates an array of opportunities previously unknown to humankind. This essay will discuss both perspectives before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
Firstly, one should understand the economic impact of globalization. When trading with each other, countries can mutually benefit by specializing in production of certain goods. Moreover, new investment opportunities allow less developed countries to substantially boost their economy in mere years. For example, significant GDP growth has ensued for countries like China and India soon after they have opened themselves to international investments.
Secondly, one of the biggest advantages of globalizatoin is the access to information. Unlike earlier, neither noble background nor having a huge sum of money to study at the university is a prerequisite for being educated in the era of an information society.
Hey! I am for a formal writing style. Feel free to correct not only my solecisms, but also anything that sounds unnatural.
Thanks in advance!
Barely anyAlmost no other topic receives as much attention as globalization does.
What you wrote was not wrong this just sounds better
While some assert that it detrimentally influences's influence is detrimental to minority cultures and languages, I firmly contend that globalization not only fosters economic growth worldwide, but also creates an array of opportunities previously unknown to humankind.
Again I just think this sounds more natural
This essay will discuss both perspectives before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
Firstly, one should understand the economic impact of globalization.
"Firstly" is not wrong but it is a bit old fashioned. You can still use it if you want though
When trading with each other, countries can mutually benefit by specializing in production of certain goods.
Moreover, new investment opportunities allow less developed countries to substantially boost their economy in mere years.
For example, significant GDP growth has ensued for countries like China and India soon after they have opened themselves up to international investments.
1. "Have" just doesn't fit here. I wish I could give you a better explanation of why it doesn't.
2. You do not need to add "up" but it makes it flow better in my opinion
Secondly, one of the biggest advantages of globalizatoin is the access to information.
Same thing as "firstly"
Unlike earlier,previous eras, you need neither a noble background nor having a huge sum of money to study at thea university ias a prerequisite for beingto be educated in the era of ana society of information society.
1. "Earlier" generally refers to a very short time ago
2. "Information society" didn't sound right. I hope my correction still conveys what you wanted to say.
Nov. 20, 2025
¡Muchas gracias!
IELTS C1, Part 1: Globalization
Barely any other topic receives as much attention as globalization does.
While some assert that it detrimentally influences minority cultures and languages, I firmly contend that globalization not only fosters economic growth worldwide, but also creates an array of opportunities previously unknown to humankind.
This essay will discuss both perspectives before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
Firstly, one should understand the economic impact of globalization.
When trading with each other, countries can mutually benefit by specializing in production of certain goods.
Moreover, new investment opportunities allow less developed countries to substantially boost their economy in mere years.
For example, significant GDP growth has ensued for countries like China and India soon after they have opened themselves to international investments.
Secondly, one of the biggest advantages of globalizatoin is the access to information.
Unlike earlier, neither noble background nor having a huge sum of money to study at the university is a prerequisite for being educated in the era of an information society.
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Barely any other topic recieves as much attention as globalization does. |
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This essay will discuss both perspectives before reaching a reasoned conclusion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Firstly, one should understand the economic impact of globalization. This sentence has been marked as perfect! First "Firstly" is not wrong but it is a bit old fashioned. You can still use it if you want though |
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When trading with each other, countries can mutually benefit by specializing in production of certain goods. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, new investment opportunities allow less developed countries to substantially boost their economy in mere years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, significant GDP growth has ensued for countries like China and India soon after they have opened themselves to international investments. This sentence has been marked as perfect! For example, significant GDP growth has ensued for countries like China and India soon after they 1. "Have" just doesn't fit here. I wish I could give you a better explanation of why it doesn't. 2. You do not need to add "up" but it makes it flow better in my opinion |
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Secondly, one of the biggest advantages of globalizatoin is the access to information. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Second Same thing as "firstly" |
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Unlike earlier, neither noble background nor having a huge sum of money to study at the university is a prerequisite for being educated in the era of an information society. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Unlike 1. "Earlier" generally refers to a very short time ago 2. "Information society" didn't sound right. I hope my correction still conveys what you wanted to say. |
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Barely any other topic receives as much attention as globalization does. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
What you wrote was not wrong this just sounds better |
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While some assert that it detrimentally influences minority cultures and languages, I firmly contend that globalization not only fosters economic growth worldwide, but also creates an array of opportunities previously unknown to humankind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! While some assert that it Again I just think this sounds more natural |
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While some assert that it detrimentally influences less popular cultures and languages, I firmly contend that globalization not only fosters economic growth worldwide, but also creates an array of opportunities previously unknown to humankind. |
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