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This is a story about December 31st last year.
I played "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.
As the music progressed, it livened up.
At exactly midnight on January 1st, 2026, ...

"Ultra Soul HI"

Midnight Moment: Inaba-san shout out, and I yelled along with him!
It felt really good.
I'm going to do it again this year.
If you'd like, I hope you all give it a try!


これは去年の12月31日の話です。

23時58分54秒にultra soulの曲をYouTube で再生しました。
曲が進むにつれて、どんどん盛り上がりました。
そして2626/1/1 0時ちょうどに

「ultra soul ハイッ!!!!!」

年越しの瞬間にボーカルの稲葉さんが叫び、同時に私も大声で叫びました。
めっちゃ気持ちよかった。今年もやろうと思います。
良かったら皆さんもやってみてください。

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This is a story aboutwas on December 31st last year.

I think because it's such a short/simple series of events it feels wrong to use "story."
You could use it in an exaggerated joking way, or to go even further, something archaic sounding like "This is the tale of the night of last year's December 31st."

I started playeding "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

I'm not sure why but it sounds better...

As the music progressed, it livened upgot more and more intense.

I think "more and more" fits どんどん
"lively" and "livened up" aren't very common in modern vernacular, it sounds old-fashioned

At exactly midnight on January 1st, 2026, ...

"Ultra Soul HI!!!"

Needs punctuation

Midnight Moment:The moment it became the new year,

Inaba-san shouted out, and I yelled along with him!

I guess using "-san" is up to personal choice, but I don't know if the average English speaker even knows what "-san" means, so it could be confusing

It felt really good.

I'm going to do it again this year.

If you'd like, I hope you all give it a try!

Feedback

I looked up the song out of curiousity, it's pretty good!

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This is a story about December 31st last year.

I played "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

As the music progressed, it livened up.

AThen, at exactly midnight on January 1st, 2026, ...

"Ultra Soul, HI!"

Just adding a bit of energy to it

Midnight Moment:

The sudden change to script style is a bit unusual here. I recommend describing the moment within the sentence itself, similar to how you did it in the Japanese version. Please see the suggestion for the next line.

The vocalist Inaba-san shout outed, and I yelled along with him, right at the moment the new year started!

It felt really good.

I'm going to do it again this year.

If you'd like, I hope you allplease give it a try!

Feedback

I didn't know about the group or the song so I listened to it on YouTube. Definitely a great choice for the vibe and energy. Even better if you can do it together with friends! 😀

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This is a story about December 31st last year.

I played "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

I started "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

I started to play "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

I began to play "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

I began playing "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

As the music progressed, it livened up.

"Ultra Soul HI"

Midnight Moment:

Inaba-san shout out, and I yelled along with him!

It felt really good.

I'm going to do it again this year.

If you'd like, I hope you all give it a try!

Shout at 0:00

This is a story on 31ththat took place on December 31st of last year.

I played "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

As the music progressed, it livened up.

The original sentence is correct, another way to write this sentence: "As the music progressed, it increasingly ramped up in intensity."

At exactly midnight on January 1st, 2026, ...

Since you have the ellipsis, you don't need the final comma.

"Ultra Soul HI"

Midnight Moment:

Inaba-san shoutyelled out, and I yelled along with him!

"Shout out" usually is a colloquial term which means "to give someone recognition for something". "Yell out" fits better here. You could also use just "shouted" ("Inaba-san shouted,").

It felt really good.

I'm going to do it again this year.

If you'd like, I hope you all give it a try!

Feedback

What good timing lol
I've never heard "Ultra Soul" by B'z before, but I have listened to B'z. My favorite song of theirs is BAD COMMUNICATION.

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Thank you for checking my writing.
Exactly! Perfect timing.
I felt great.

I love "BAD COMMUNICATION" as well.
If you'd like, I'd like you to listen to "ALONE", "ギリギリchop"and "LOVE PHANTOM".

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P.S. I'd like you to listen to "Love me I love you" as well.

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This is a story on December 31st last year.


I played "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.


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I started "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m. I started to play "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m. I began to play "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m. I began playing "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

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I started playeding "Ultra Soul" by B'z on YouTube at 11:58:54 p.m.

I'm not sure why but it sounds better...

As the music progressed, it livened up.


As the music progressed, it livened up.

The original sentence is correct, another way to write this sentence: "As the music progressed, it increasingly ramped up in intensity."

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As the music progressed, it livened upgot more and more intense.

I think "more and more" fits どんどん "lively" and "livened up" aren't very common in modern vernacular, it sounds old-fashioned

At exactly midnight on January 1st, 2026, ...


At exactly midnight on January 1st, 2026, ...

Since you have the ellipsis, you don't need the final comma.

AThen, at exactly midnight on January 1st, 2026, ...

At exactly midnight on January 1st, 2026, ...

"Ultra Soul HI"


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"Ultra Soul, HI!"

Just adding a bit of energy to it

"Ultra Soul HI!!!"

Needs punctuation

Midnight Moment:


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Midnight Moment:

The sudden change to script style is a bit unusual here. I recommend describing the moment within the sentence itself, similar to how you did it in the Japanese version. Please see the suggestion for the next line.

Midnight Moment:The moment it became the new year,

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This is a story aboutwas on December 31st last year.

I think because it's such a short/simple series of events it feels wrong to use "story." You could use it in an exaggerated joking way, or to go even further, something archaic sounding like "This is the tale of the night of last year's December 31st."

Inaba-san shout out, and I yelled along with him!


Inaba-san shoutyelled out, and I yelled along with him!

"Shout out" usually is a colloquial term which means "to give someone recognition for something". "Yell out" fits better here. You could also use just "shouted" ("Inaba-san shouted,").

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The vocalist Inaba-san shout outed, and I yelled along with him, right at the moment the new year started!

Inaba-san shouted out, and I yelled along with him!

I guess using "-san" is up to personal choice, but I don't know if the average English speaker even knows what "-san" means, so it could be confusing

It felt really good.


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I'm going to do it again this year.


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If you'd like, I hope you all give it a try!


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