July 3, 2026
Travel
My passion for travel began when I was fifteen, and my latest journey took me to China. During the flight, my friend Morgan watched the mountains from the plane window; the scenery was breathtaking, with snow covering the peaks like white caps. Although I landed feeling exhausted and hungry, my enthusiasm for exploring a new city and meeting its people led me to take a short stroll near the hotel to taste some local cuisine.
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My passion for travel began when I was fifteen, and my latest journey took me to China.
My passion for travel began when I was fifteen and my latest journey took me to China.
No comma needed when combining two independent clauses.
During the flight, my friend, Morgan, watched the mountains from the plane window; the scenery was breathtaking, with snow covering the peaks like white caps. During the flight, my friend, Morgan, watched the mountains from the plane window; the scenery was breathtaking, with snow covering the peaks like white caps.
Although I landed feeling exhausted and hungry, my enthusiasm for exploring a new city and meeting its people led me to take a short stroll near the hotel to taste some local cuisine.
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July 3, 2026
My passion for travel began when I was fifteen, and my latest journey took me to China.
No comma needed when combining two independent clauses.
I disagree, it flows better with the comma.
July 3, 2026
During the flight, my friend, Morgan, watched the mountains from the plane window; the scenery was breathtaking, with snow covering the peaks like white caps.
The no comma version is correct here. If you put the commas, it would be more like "my friend, whose name is Morgan..."
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July 3, 2026
Either is correct isn't it? But "My friend Morgan" without commas definitely flows better.
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My passion for travel began when I was fifteen, and my latest journey took me to China.
My passion for travel began when I was fifteen No comma needed when combining two independent clauses. |
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During the flight, my friend Morgan watched the mountains from the plane window; the scenery was breathtaking, with snow covering the peaks like white caps. During the flight, my friend, Morgan, watched the mountains from the plane window; the scenery was breathtaking, with snow covering the peaks like white caps. During the flight, my friend, Morgan, watched the mountains from the plane window; the scenery was breathtaking, with snow covering the peaks like white caps. |
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Although I landed feeling exhausted and hungry, my enthusiasm for exploring a new city and meeting its people led me to take a short stroll near the hotel to taste some local cuisine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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