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Oct. 2, 2025

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I would like write about a day in my work

Today in the morning I went to the central office of my job, this office is about 1 hour and half from my house. I arrived 10:30 am and my boss and me we had a metting with the comercial manager. The meeting time was 11 am but he has put off the meeting because he were waiting for another parther in order to finish his work

We met to introduce to him, because this manager arrived to Lima just 1 month ago, so , we had not met yet.

First I introduce me, I said my name, my age and my occupation then, I talked about our main daily activities and suddenly I realised that my boss (Juanca) had forgotten his glasses in his houses. I thought " How will Juanca read the report?, He must look for glasses soon. O maybe I could read the report for he, I have to went on my presetation and the magener asked me some question.

Finally the manager told me that next week we will have a meeting with the port staff to arrange some issue. I looking for ward these day.

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I would like write about amy day in myat work.

Today in thehis morning I went to the central office ofor my job, this office iit's about 1an hour and a half from my house.

I arrived at 10:30 am and my boss and me weI had a meteting with the comercial manager.

The meeting time was supposed to be at 11 am but the has put off the meetingcommercial manager had to put it off because he wereas waiting for another parther in ordner to finish his work

We met to introduce to him, because


The reason we met was to have a team introduction as
this manager only arrived toin Lima just 1last month ago, so , we had non't met yet.

Rephrased it to be more natural

First I introduced meyself , I said my name, my age and my occupation t. Then, I talked about our main daily activities and suddenly I realised that my boss (Juanca) had forgottenleft his glasses in his housesat home.

I thought " How will Juanca read the report?, He must look forneed to use his glasses soon."

O"Or maybe I could read the report for he, I have toim..." ¶

I then
went on to give my presentation and the magennager asked me some questions.

Plural because you said some it would be questions not question

Finally, the manager told me that next week we will have a meeting with the port staff to arrangefix some issue they were having.

I looking for ward theseo that day.

First I introduced me, Iyself, said my name, my age and my occupation, then, I talked about our main daily activities and suddenly I realised that my boss (Juanca) had forgotten his glasses in his houses.

I thought " How will Juanca read the report?, He must look for his glasses soon.

Or maybe I could read the report for heim, I have to went onfor my presentation and the magennager asked me some questions.

I arrived 10:30 am and my boss and me we had a metting with the comercial manager.


I arrived at 10:30 am and my boss and me weI had a meteting with the comercial manager.

I looking for ward these day.


I looking for ward theseo that day.

I would like write about a day in my work


I would like write about amy day in myat work.

Today in the morning I went to the central office of my job, this office is about 1 hour and half from my house.


Today in thehis morning I went to the central office ofor my job, this office iit's about 1an hour and a half from my house.

The meeting time was 11 am but he has put off the meeting because he were waiting for another parther in order to finish his work We met to introduce to him, because this manager arrived to Lima just 1 month ago, so , we had not met yet.


The meeting time was supposed to be at 11 am but the has put off the meetingcommercial manager had to put it off because he wereas waiting for another parther in ordner to finish his work

We met to introduce to him, because


The reason we met was to have a team introduction as
this manager only arrived toin Lima just 1last month ago, so , we had non't met yet.

Rephrased it to be more natural

First I introduce me, I said my name, my age and my occupation then, I talked about our main daily activities and suddenly I realised that my boss (Juanca) had forgotten his glasses in his houses.


First I introduced me, Iyself, said my name, my age and my occupation, then, I talked about our main daily activities and suddenly I realised that my boss (Juanca) had forgotten his glasses in his houses.

First I introduced meyself , I said my name, my age and my occupation t. Then, I talked about our main daily activities and suddenly I realised that my boss (Juanca) had forgottenleft his glasses in his housesat home.

I thought " How will Juanca read the report?, He must look for glasses soon.


I thought " How will Juanca read the report?, He must look for his glasses soon.

I thought " How will Juanca read the report?, He must look forneed to use his glasses soon."

O maybe I could read the report for he, I have to went on my presetation and the magener asked me some question.


Or maybe I could read the report for heim, I have to went onfor my presentation and the magennager asked me some questions.

O"Or maybe I could read the report for he, I have toim..." ¶

I then
went on to give my presentation and the magennager asked me some questions.

Plural because you said some it would be questions not question

Finally the manager told me that next week we will have a meeting with the port staff to arrange some issue.


Finally, the manager told me that next week we will have a meeting with the port staff to arrangefix some issue they were having.

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